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for Blood & Tears

by doggieearlover

person inu hanyou nikkie
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH!!! OHHHH myyyy!!!!! -quickly starts fanning herself- THAT WAS HOT!!!! I think I may need to step outside in the winter air for a bit... WOW!!! and double WOWWW!!!!!! That was an awesome chapter!! Thank you for having Sess tell Inuyasha about the horror parts of pregnancy!! I thought that was a very sweet touch.. ( usually author have the characters remain ignorant and therefore having very nasty fights that result in near miscarriages or someone -usually Kagome- getting attacked or abducted or going to another like koga/kikyou for comfort) I commend you for this most delightful touch!!! I wonder if there will be more foursome scenes later on? And Kagome having twins.... RIGHT ON!! I love how you have kept them all in character and very mature (with baka moments) _yes I feel Sesshoumaru would be this way over the passage of time. I love your story so much!!! You totally rock!! What an awesome writer you are!!! You have an excellent grasp of all the elements to writing and it really shows... Thank you for sharing your story with us readers!!! I can't wait for the next wonderful chapter!!!
person Ladykaa28
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your fic about the four main characters. You did answer some of my questions in this last chapter. I'll wait for the next chapter to see if you answer any others.
person Ladykaa28
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that everyone is ok. I thought it was funny when Kichou came back and the other two were blushing becasue of Sesshoumaru. I really like him in this fic. It shows him being more like his father. I'm not saying that he should have tried to take Kagome away from Inuyasha, but it made less untouchable if that makes any sense.
person inu hanyou nikkie
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
....sniffle....goes into a corner, curls up in a ball and proceeds to bawls like a baby.... sniffles.... comes back to computer... THAT was one heck of a powerful chapter!!! That was truly a very heart rending/stopping and breath ending chapter!! DARNNNN!!!! YOU ARE ONE HECK of a VERY GIFTED WRITER!!!!!!!! I will be on pins and needles and worried about Sesshoumaru and Kagome til the next update. I forsee you gettting lots of reviews demanding and screaming for updates ASAP... Don't listen..... with the next chapter take as much time as needed to make it prefect!! I absolutely love this story.. WOW!! and WOW again!!! You must have had been teary eyed when you wrote that part... I really don't know how to express to you just how awesome you are with the story!!! You are able to weave and stitch together such powerful magic!! Now.. if you'll excuse me ... I need to go back to my corner and bawl again.... ( just kidding) But yes THAT is what makes a story prefect... when the reader can become part of it themselves.... You TOTALLY ROCK!!!! please keep up the most excellent work!!
person Snowfall
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a new twist. The chapter seemed kind of rushed though. I know that I have that problem quite often and have started reviewing my chapters quite a few times before I post them. Usually stepping away for a day helps. Still, I never can seem to get all of my errors out. *sigh* You do a great job when it comes to that. Nice exciting chapter.

Snowfall
person badkitty
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still lovin it. The lemons are so HOT. Update soon!
person inufan625
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just realized that it's been a while since I left youa review here. I really enjoyed the newest chapter particularly the "My mate" part. So keep up the good work and I eagerly await your next chapter.
person PJ
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know that I am really enjoying this story. keep writing I look forward to the next chapter
person FangEars
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Howdy, I really like this story. I have never really liked the Inuyasha and Kagome pairing, but the way you write makes me enjoy it. Keep up the story, please go on with stories of what Inuyasha and Kagome do with their lives. Please continue writing new stories to.
person Anon
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story...if you need an idea, I think you should do a full lemony chapter where sesshomaru and kichou use inuyasha's christmas gift