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by DragonflyMina

person karine
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Arg ! Your story is so good !! I can't wait to read the next and next and NEXT chapter ^^
Don't stop continu ! ^^
person labelle
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
evil little cliffy you got their lets go talk about this in the back yes. (good work)
person Dark
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EVIL Cliff hanger..... O well. Love the story, i cant wait for the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo... yay sexual tension
thats good
keep it up
get new chappy quick
please?
*puppy dog eyes*
person Luvspanky
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, but could you make the chapters longer. The way you have the story chopped up into small bits kind of makes the story less enjoyable. However, thats just my opinion.
person Jessica
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::.i :+:love:+: the story update soon pleaz::.
person Kags21
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it a lot are you also going to put Naraku and Koga in the story as well?
person YukiAsao
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
? these chapters are SO short. They're like paragraphs, not chapters. Anyway, this is a really good story so far. Please update soon.
person bookworm88
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please it was really good
person Luna_Simi
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the story can't wait to read more. Please i can't seem to find it on here where you can add a story to pafiorts or what not so will you please please please e-mail me when you update so that i can keep on reading the story. i just can't wait to be able to read more.....i just love it!!!


P.S. by the way my e-mail is jennirosebud2007@yahoo.com