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by DragonflyMina

schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just thought you might like to know that your last chapter is posted twice. I love this story though, so please update soon.
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad you liked my story! It feels good to have another writer tell you that your story is good. I will be putting chapter 2 up within the next few days so keep a look out. Hope you update your story soon!
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lovely chap! sorry I have not read and reviewed earlier. I have been very busy.
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved the new chap and can't wait to read more though I wish your chapters could be a little longer.
person chubbers
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay now i know your out to give me a heart attack..... p-p-p-pleeease update soon! O_O
person prietess
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i thought it was a really good story and i liked it very much. good job!
person Lucius sikilmituile
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
moe, soon, please!!!!!!
person chubbers
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! im so happy you updatd! although im glad you pat attention to peoples reviews, theres no need to be sorry for taking some time to update! its better than you putting up a whole bunch of chapters that are complete crap for the sake of finishing the story...... i love what your doing so far its just im not a vary patient person. so please, ignore me if i get outta hand im just anxious for the next chapter ;)
person bookworm88
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep the chapters coming. you are doing really good
person ami
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool

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