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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man.... i thought you fell off the face of the earth or something!HOPEFULLY you will update sooner???
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this fic! It definitely has some unique outlooks on it which I like! I just finished reading chapter 4 and it was just as good as the others. The only thing that I feel could make it better would be to slow the pace down a bit more to allow the reader to experience more, in other words, add more stuff! That means your writing is very good, we just want more of it! Also another bonus would be to have the chapters last longer. Again, I love your work! Enjoying very much, I am hooked and will continue to read & critique!
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Doing good! I just want to be selfish & want longer chappies! Great work! You are giving such nice detailed visions for everyone to see by the nice way you are describing the characters. Love it!
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading chappie 7 and wow, it was so much longer! We just like your work and can enjoy it even more when it is longer! Now off to read that last chappie you have up.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading your last chapter, the chapter 8. Very nice & very long! Now I am MORE than looking forward to reading your next chapter which I hope comes up sometime soon! Loved it.
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is bitchin
you should update ^.^
<3 kry
you should update ^.^
<3 kry
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like the story you have going here. Saraku is my nickname. its pronounced Sa-ra-ku. its a cross between Sango and Naraku. its hard to explain really. but ill sum it all up.
Sango- cause i look alot like her.
Naraku- cause i have his attitude.
i was wondering, how do you spell the dragons name? so far ive seen Aun, AhUn, your spelling,& Ah & Un, im really confused.
Sango- cause i look alot like her.
Naraku- cause i have his attitude.
i was wondering, how do you spell the dragons name? so far ive seen Aun, AhUn, your spelling,& Ah & Un, im really confused.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
After reading a dozen stories with the same plot, yours is a nice change. keep it up
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Extremely good take off of the story and you introduced very unique and interesting characters. I especially liked Mina, she sounds really cool. Since Kagome has no idea what is going on this time around, she won't put up with much from our emotionally anal retentive Sesshomaru. This is a brilliant concept and you are making it unfold perfectly. Waiting breathlessly for the next chapter.
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is very good... I enjoyed reading it...please keep up the good work and update soon....later!
-Lady Akina
-Lady Akina