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by DragonflyMina

person lara5170
schedule June 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story is just starting to get interesting. I'd love to read more and find out what happens next but I noticed that this story hasn't been updated in since 2006. Unless it's been posted on another site and it's been continued, or even completed, then I guess it's over. I'm going to see if I can find on another site, what have I got to lose??
schedule March 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this was a very good alternate version. I hope you add more chapters soon since you did in fact leave it hanging quite abruptly.
schedule March 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wish you had finished this :(
person MidNight
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this story very much please continue.
person Cleo
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really getting into your story, but i've been wondering since your last chapter does Sesshoumaru know of the shikon no tama that's hidden within her just wondering and update soon!
person Sankontesou
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is great!!! update again soon!!!
person Katgome
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your fic!!! Very different and fun. Chapter 9 was just as good as the others!!! The story is going slow enough that it makes it tantilizingly fun!!!! I love seeing Sesshoumaru fighting his desires for Kagome, poor guy is just gonna get whooped by her!!! It will be fun to see him fight so hard then finally give in with a roar. Keep up the awesome work!!!
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do you have this story posted anywhere else that way I can read it while aff is down?
person sassy
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great now up date.
person yasha girl
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like the new update and thanks for coming back with the story^^

so sesshomaru is making kagome pay off her debts because of the damage to her room.

so who is dirtying the floor and having kagome clean it every morning?

sesshomaru is caring about what kagoe thinks of him and what she's thinking about.

sesshomaru is angry because he even cares about what kagome thinks.

what will happen now? will kagome escape and find her way home,back to the bone eater's well or will she stay there?

what of kagome's family they must be worried by now or do they know what's going on already? is kagome going to turn into a demon like an inuyoukai like sesshomaru? kagome's family are they demons?

onegai update soon onegai

see ya round

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