rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Ok, I am going to be as nice as I can about this...The fic is not understandable. Paragraphs are our friends. Ummm, in the part about Sesshomaru, you made him sound like he was a bed wetter. Personally, I would recommend getting a beta and taking down the fic and starting over. I am not flaming you, but I do think that it needs a lot of work. I can tell that you are a beginner and it takes guts to try something new, but seriously, consider getting a beta. You can usually get a beta by asking.

Good luck and I wish you well.