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Nice first chapter. I enjoyed everyting about it. Easy to read was the best part. All the paragraphs flowed together. I like you humor.

ermmm are you going to pair her with Yomi? I just saw the title and wondered snce Yomi referred to his sight as his light that they could reeeally understand each other if you get my drift. Wonderful start by the way...hee.

Get it out, get it out, I implore you. I'm already smitten. The writing is clear, concise, but moves along at a strong pace, building up steam as it catapults into sudden twists. I had a feeling even after the short introduction paragraphs that she would sustain some injury, but didn't know for sure what that was until you had her turn around. Still, I'm anxious to learn what happened to the other Inu-tachi. Were their deaths final even after she purified Naraku out of existence? How did her powers increase so dramatically? Does it involve a re-embedded jewel? Gak! Too many questions and I love them all. With as engaging as this writing is, and based off of hints written along the way, can I assume this is a Kagome/Kurama fic? I adore them, so if so, WOOT!!!!! Amazing work so far, please keep it up!!

I don't mind the new story, honest! *snickers* I will be really interested in this story. Simply for the fact that she managed to bop Yus. on the head twice, and he didn't see either coming. *go kags!* Anyways, I can't wait to see how this one turns out. I sort of hope Shippou is in it. He's my favorite char. *snuggles the cutie!* TTFN! Lady Banshee 999

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Hiei and Kagome or Hiei, Kagome, and Kurama please?

I like this, can't wait to see what happens next. personally I don't mind that you've started a new fic (especially since it's a good 1), I figure, when you get inspired you get inspired & that eventually you'll get back to the other fic(s) or even alternate between them.

Isn't it the boys at five the girls at three and then both at seven? Oh I don't mind you starting a new story as long as you keep updating, it's nice to see someone who can get some facts straight (I can't say much really I'm not japanese but kudos to you on your multilinguilism!) Sometimes I don't even get my english as good as yours! lol.

I rarely read any story that has only one chapter. I often find that the vast majority of those, good or bad, or often never continued or finished. It they get to at least the fifth chapter, they are more likely to at least continue. I chose on this occasion, however, to make an exception and find that I am glad that I did so.

Excellent beginning and well written, too. The intrigue is quite gripping and I look forward to seeing more soon. As with the others, there are many questions that arise. Was Naraku truly defeated? What about the battle was the cause of her blindness? Was she able to at least defeat him in time to allow Shippou and Inuyasha to survive? The Taijiya stopped breathing, but did the houshi live? Lots of questions and tons of room for the answers to trickle forth. Great job!

On a more humorous note...Kurama noticed that Kagome's scent was of lavendar (one of my favorite plants in the garden), and purity...LOL...can anyone tell me exactly what 'purity' smells like...LOL!

Seriously, no insult intented, just a bit of humour. I love the story and hope to see it up-dated soon along with your other super fic.

Sincerely,
Vyncent

Nicely done. I hope to see an update from you soon.

this is good so far, i wonder how she lost her sight. please update again soon.