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for A Brother’s Love

by STwilight

person Dante
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice start, i do hope things get better and that Naraku dies. I like the idea of Kouga and Miroku getting together; you don't see it much.

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person OnyxLight
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interested in seeing whats up next ... Mir/Kou OC for Sango
person EternalDarkness
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story...I like the way you didn't just jump into the rape scene...its alot more interesting that way...as for future pairings..Kouga/Miroku sounds awesome
person inufan007
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please let things get better for inu!!! i can't stand to see him in pain. and miroku and sango pairing or miroku and kouga pairing are both fine with me!
person nyth wolf
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep writing i want to know what happened. will it become an mpreg or not and how will he act or his friends act when they find him.
person Princess Sin
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was a very interesting story. i liked it. i can't wait to read the next chapter. So will this be a Mpreg. the reason i ask
is because i have read several stories with Sesshy being pregnant for Naraku but not one story where inuyasha is
pregnant for him. as for sango and miroku i like them both. so i say let them stay together.
person BlueFire
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story, but I just had one question....what does the "kuku" thing come from? I haven't watched many of the IY episodes so I wouldn't know if that was a sound Naraku made....in any case Keep up the good work!
person Lady Aqualyne (Too Lazy To Sign In)
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Poor Inuyasha... my poor poor Inuyasha... I hope Sessy helps him... actually in truth I hope Sessy kills Naraku. ::Eye twitches:: Man I can't wait till you update. I like the idea... can't wait to see what all you have planned to do with it.
person Kiara
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very intriguing and interesting start! I totally loved it even though I did feel very sorry for Inuyasha! And I also hate Kikyo and Kagome, so we both have one thing in common. Anyway, I can hardly wait for the next chapters. Please, update soon and often!
person Polka dot
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how to review, I'm not found of the rape scenario, but I love Sessy/INu