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for A Brother’s Love

by STwilight

person sma_orlando
schedule December 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please finish this story.
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon.
person jdbbrz27
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've enjoyed your story so far very interesting. I have noticed though that it's been awhile since you last updated so I was just wondering if you were going to continue or not if not could you at least let us know so we won't keep looking forward to a new update and thanks for at least sharing a little of a good story so far.
person GellyBelly
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dude.... are you going to update soon or just abandon this story?
don't keep your readers waiting man.
person dela1
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you are going to finish this story I like it a lot
person Death Angel 101
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update update update asap. LOVE IT!!! YEA and some one else who hates Kagome. U don't come across many or at least i don't. Keep writing. LOVE IT!!!
person DINKA
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think i like this story...according with a read!!!

i hope you update soon!!
person Kurai.Noto
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Nice rape scene... I like that pairing, but... yeah. Inuyasha and Sesshomaru are so much better off together... I also have to tell you... KU... I found out... means 'Knowlegde Unlimited' so everytime you make Naraku go "kuku", I hear "knowlegde unlimited knowledge unlimited". Don't ask me how I came up with this. I just found this one time at school. Anyway. I see that you have another chapter so I'm going to read it and review! See ya!

-Kurai Noto (%)
person Kurai.Noto
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Great chapter there. I think that Miroku and Koga can be together and an OC be made for Sango. Please? Update when you have the chance! Thanks!
person RandomReviewer
schedule May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm very interested in your story there are just some mistakes. You have a lot of "|, i, !" and other things like that. I believe that it was due to how you uploaded the chapter. It's rather annoying but nothing to extreme. Beside that the story is rather interesting. I can't say that I'm completely convinced with the whole "something's wrong with Inuyasha" act. It doesn't seem to me that he's changed much from the experience. I was half expecting him to completely be cut off from the "real-world" or be a little bit more jumpy. Although that's just my thinking, but it's your story and plot and I'm just talking. ^.^