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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is really good!! please update asap!!!
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love this chappy! Liked the Connor/Balthazar/Sesshoumaru conflict. Can't wait though.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!! This story is great. I love the tension. Give Sesshoumaru some competition.
God- it is one or the rare times I can say "its good to be Kagome" ONLY in the scenario of
the attention she's getting from her admirers and not from what happened to her.
God- it is one or the rare times I can say "its good to be Kagome" ONLY in the scenario of
the attention she's getting from her admirers and not from what happened to her.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow it gets better everytime! I want to read more please i beg of you update as soon as ya can!
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just keeps getting better and better. I really like this story, very original, and well thought out. The Scottish accents are written very well. Keep it up. Looking forward to the next chapter.
MidnightStar
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How good you’re back now. I thought it would take you longer to update, not that I am complaining, I am happy about it. What to write.
Ah I have it. I just must apologize for not have read the new chapter to something to talk about. Will do so later.
To this story. I was a little dissappointed when Sess interrupted Kag and Balthazar. That part was so sweet that my heart sped up. Balthazar so so genlte and lowing towards Kagome and from his part, in my eyes, it is something special. He, akin to Sess, is not one who shows feelings openly or ever has them. To love Kagome being a human is unlike the warrior he is, but it is so sweat. How he tried to comfort her for being frigid and qelled her worries made me smile. I was a little bit startled how she would react, what made me at ease were his reassuring word. “You know I would never hurt you.” I wrote it this way because I love the scottish dialect and won’t spoil it. Really, the dialect is cute. I love it in this fic. What I understand is Kagomes anxiety about making love to a man. Her first time was a terrifying one and no wonder she doesn’t know how nice it can be if two people are in love and share it. For her, this was lost as Naraku raped her. She will come over it, I’m sure, for you wrote so. If it will be with Sess or another inu (scottish), that doesn’t matter. About the lemons. I love them when you write them, but I don’t miss them in this plot. Please don’t understand me wrong. The story is so good, that I didn’t ralized that here were none. My mind was on the plot and what would happen next to think about it. The nicer will it be when the right time comes. I think, Kagome is yet not ready for it and the way you approach the matter slowly makes the story more exciting for me.
I’m curios what will Sess do about the two inus fretting around “his” Kagome, how will he get her love for him. This is what interest me in the first place, what will he do and how.
I really enjoy this fic and I’m so glad you continue with writing.
Take care
Linda
Ah I have it. I just must apologize for not have read the new chapter to something to talk about. Will do so later.
To this story. I was a little dissappointed when Sess interrupted Kag and Balthazar. That part was so sweet that my heart sped up. Balthazar so so genlte and lowing towards Kagome and from his part, in my eyes, it is something special. He, akin to Sess, is not one who shows feelings openly or ever has them. To love Kagome being a human is unlike the warrior he is, but it is so sweat. How he tried to comfort her for being frigid and qelled her worries made me smile. I was a little bit startled how she would react, what made me at ease were his reassuring word. “You know I would never hurt you.” I wrote it this way because I love the scottish dialect and won’t spoil it. Really, the dialect is cute. I love it in this fic. What I understand is Kagomes anxiety about making love to a man. Her first time was a terrifying one and no wonder she doesn’t know how nice it can be if two people are in love and share it. For her, this was lost as Naraku raped her. She will come over it, I’m sure, for you wrote so. If it will be with Sess or another inu (scottish), that doesn’t matter. About the lemons. I love them when you write them, but I don’t miss them in this plot. Please don’t understand me wrong. The story is so good, that I didn’t ralized that here were none. My mind was on the plot and what would happen next to think about it. The nicer will it be when the right time comes. I think, Kagome is yet not ready for it and the way you approach the matter slowly makes the story more exciting for me.
I’m curios what will Sess do about the two inus fretting around “his” Kagome, how will he get her love for him. This is what interest me in the first place, what will he do and how.
I really enjoy this fic and I’m so glad you continue with writing.
Take care
Linda
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter, but it only made me more desparate for more updates!
I think it's perfectly in character that Kagome would feel pity for Inuyasha and the others, and I think at some point she's gonna need to forgive them. Not for their sake, but for her own. She'll probably never trust them again, and she'll never forget what they did (who could?), but this kind of hate and anger could really change her. Kind of reminds me of Kikyou.
As for the Kagome's boys, God, who am I routing for? I adore Sesshomaru, and I love that he's trying to make things right for her, but Connor and Balthazar are just so amazing. You'll have to write fics for each of them after this one, that's all.
BTW, congratulations on your nomination! You're an amazing writer, and I'm addicted to all your stories, current and complete. Update soon!
I think it's perfectly in character that Kagome would feel pity for Inuyasha and the others, and I think at some point she's gonna need to forgive them. Not for their sake, but for her own. She'll probably never trust them again, and she'll never forget what they did (who could?), but this kind of hate and anger could really change her. Kind of reminds me of Kikyou.
As for the Kagome's boys, God, who am I routing for? I adore Sesshomaru, and I love that he's trying to make things right for her, but Connor and Balthazar are just so amazing. You'll have to write fics for each of them after this one, that's all.
BTW, congratulations on your nomination! You're an amazing writer, and I'm addicted to all your stories, current and complete. Update soon!
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay! Hot update.. More please ! LoL
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dang! I just thought that Baltaar was about to break Kagome in! haha! I was freaking when Sess caught them! I know he was pissed. That was a pretty exciting chapter Sis. Nothing like a hard erection pressing against a smooth stomach to get the blood pumping, ya know? Poor Kagome... it looks like she is cursed to forever draw fine ass youkai to her like bees to honey. If only we knew her secret! If only she would share! LOL! Great job as always~
Hentai Sis
Hentai Sis
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? Another great chapter. Keep up the good work.
It's great the traitors are accepting their lot. Can Kagome have both Connor and Balthazar?
Update as soon as you can. I can't wait to read more.
It's great the traitors are accepting their lot. Can Kagome have both Connor and Balthazar?
Update as soon as you can. I can't wait to read more.