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you havent posted in awhile, & im jus really hoping that you havent decided to leave us hanging

wow this is so good!!! you haaaaaavvvvvee to update soon onegai!!



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Please oh Please oh please hurry with the next chapter. I have patiently waited and waited. Your story is fantastic and i can hardly wait to read more of it. I know you must have your own life and have other priorities other than writing your story but i cant help but ask that you hurry. =) thanks sooo much .. hope to read the next chap. soon. - A loving fan

OMG! I love your story. Your OC are so enthraling. Balthazar kicks ass! He's meh favorite <3 hehe. Woot! TTFN!

hey! this is another great chapter! I am so in love with this story i check to see if you have updated everyday!! I love the fact that Kagome and Balthazar had a little action in the woods. Can't wait till you post another chapter! keep going you are doing great!

I simply adore this story! I love it so much that I managed to read all the chapters in one day! I must say that you are a writer deserving of the highest rewards for the skill and creativity you display in your work.

The manner in which you were able to bring in these wonderfully unique and beautiful characters-and yes they are beautiful since they come off as being so damn sexy!- is an amazing feit unto itself. Thank you for doing something not of the ordinary.

I am a dedicated fan who will await further chapters with a blind loyalty akin to addiction. Please update soon as I fear I might go into withdrawals.

Farewell,

Bella

i really like ur story its one of a kind i wish there was a way on adultfanfiction so i can know when u up date like fanfiction.net but.... i guess i'll have to keep checking up every once in awhile to see if u have updated
keep up the great work

Oh you mean thing you! You got me hooked on 2 stories at once!!! Now I'll be agonizing over waiting for updates for both of your new stories. Well at least you know how to hook them and reel them in, when it comes to ending chapters. Btw I noticed in the later chapters that you started useing the scottish accent typing besides when the scots are talking. I love it!

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!! UPDATE SOON!!! ^_^

I rarely review on AFF, but this was so good that I couldn't resist. I LOVE Highland Romances (Karen Moning has some AMAZING ones, lol, but I think you've already read some of hers) so I'm really loving this so far. Aww, I *really* want Kagome to get with Balthazar, but I think she's going to end up with Sesshomaru. Whoever she ends up with is gonna make me really sad for the other two dudes...-_-; Man, what I wouldn't do for a mass of hott guys to be after me...^_^

hey love the latest chapter. but i was wondering...... in the 4th chapter when you were describing what all the scottish inus looked like, you really didnt say what Balthazar looked like. he's always referred to as the dark inu. could you possibly describe him in one of your future chapters, it'd be greatly appreciated =)