rate_review Reviews

this is a great story you are doing a wonderful job writing the whole recovery and stuff. I do have a question... what about the jewel? did Kagome have part of it and did Naraku take it or did the ones that betrayed her take it? Does Kouga still have his shards if he does and I was Kagome I would demand that he hand them over. Anyway update soon please.

Ooooh, I jsut got a visual of Griffin and Conner getting intoa fight and Kagome accidently seeing the violence...yeah. Scary in my opinion. I love the fact that you are keepng Kags in character with what hapened to her, and love the visuals you give me. Ummm, I would love for you to update this...but do you think you could do a side one shot with the scotsmen and Kags? I think that would be sweet *blushes*.

I've read your story first at A Single spark but as every one welll knows the site has been dowm and it is on read mode only-anyway I digress, this is an exceellent story and I must say that you are one of my favorite writers. I can't wait until the next update. Thank you so much for your talent and sharing it with us.

This is a great story. I think Sango is only thinking about the "rape" that happened to Kagome.... she is not thinking about the whole picture and the fact that they betrayed her. She is only thinking about how they didn't mean it to happen (the rape) she is not thinking about the betrayal..... I remember a saying it says "The deepest circles of hell are reserved for betrayers and mutineers"

Keep writing this is a great story

This is one hell of a story.... I just adore it, no that's not right I love it.... Yeah, oh I liked the way you added the Scottish lyrics to the story... That is a hard feat to acomplish I love your characters especially Connor and Balthazar..... I can't wait to see Kagome doing more than slapping hands away or using a bit of miko power.

I would like to see her come out fighting like never before. Just from reading this story I found anther way that would make the ending grand the original plot with Sesshoumaru and the second having the Scottish Inu Connor wait five hundred years to see her again but again that's my insight so far. I would love to know where you learned the scot's terminology for old style writing I love writings done in different languages. Until next time peace.

This is a great story please continue soon. I cannot believe those guys wanting forgivness so soon after everything that happened. They even tied her up for goodness sakes she couldn't even fight back. It would have been better if they would have just sent her home. I can not believe Inuyasha withdrew his protection and believed that undead b*tch. Kikyou is the one that "killed" him and he still believes her... they all did what idiots. He has kept his promise to Kikyou time and time again even after she had betrayed him but what has Kagome done to deserve that. If you have seen any of the movies... in movie two Kagome takes and arrow in the back protecting Inuyasha when he couldn't dodge it. And she keeps him from becoming that mindless youki in the movie and in the series as well. She has always protected him and stood up to youki much stronger then herself to help them. She protected him when he has been human. Heck he wouldn't even have his sword it it wasn't for her. I think I know why Sessy sword wouldn't work for him... because he did not help her and was not honor able so the sword or "his father's spirit" would not aid him in "erasing" the harm her caused. I think it would serve Inuyasha right if his sword didn't work for him since he withdrew his protection from Kagome. Sure it is supposed to help him protect humans but I think his father would be very disappointed and so the sword shouldn't work for a while. He should have to earn back the ability to use the sword... maybe Sessy too. Kagome also saved them all from Naraku when Sango had betrayed them trying to save her brother. It was Kagome's arrow that stopped Naraku. Also about Kagome still having her powers... well Kikyo was trained in her powers so I suppose that is why she is still able to use them... but Kikyo is only alive because she has part of Kagome's soul which would give her part of Kagome's powers? I think Kagome's powers don't depend on a pure "body" but a pure heart/spirit. And the only reason Kikyo doesn't taint the jewel could be because she has part of Kagome's soul.

I also like how you have having it that Kagome didn't recover like overnite like many stories do this is very realistic. I love the Scottish youki they are wonderful. Connor better be careful I think he is going to set himself up for some heartache.

Anyway please keep writing this is a great story.

Its such a great story and it only keeps gettin better. I cant even wait to see what will happen next, I might die from anticipation first. LOL There just so much going on that holds my interest. I know everuone says this but I love the way they all talk. well I hope theres more scenes with just Kagome/Sessh coming up!! Peace

I just wished to say I have enjoyed reading your story and was wondering how often you update your story,
because I am looking forward to reading more.
I cheered when Kagome used her miko gift on Inu (is that wrong of me? Grins I am a fan of Sess and not Inu)
I am hoping you however go a little more into the character of Balthazar (why does that name sound so familure to me…)
Anyway… I am looking forward to reading more ..
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Yes!!!

I am so glad that you continue to write this story. I first read it at another site and had not bee able to find it again. Anyway, excellent job in writing this story, I am looking forward to reading more about all of the demons from Scotland. I have a question though...Is Kagome going to end up with Seshomaru?

OMG!!!! PLEASE FOR THE LOVE ALL THAT'S HOLY... UPDATE!!! WAHHHH!!!