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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know usualy im so impatient whe it comes to updating. i just get so into the story it feels like im quitting crack cold turkey (no i dont know what it really feels like) when the story stops all of a sudden with no ending. but as someone else has said in here, if it means the excellent quality of this story them by all means take your time! justplease please dont give up on this story, when so many people have fallen in love with it! *muah* i love you!
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really luve this story, it so intrigueing and can't help but luve it i hope u update soon. i hate the fact that gome was raped by naraku and how her friends HER FRIENDS betrayed her like that and sango tooi thought she totally desereved that, but i guess that is wut it makes it a great story. i'm still wondering if kags and sess are actally gonna end up together i hope so even tho he did partake in the betayl i still luve him he's soo hot hahhaha anyways lol please update as soon as u can!!!!
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bad, bad Naraku. He is really filthy. Please Update soon!
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You sick, motha fucka. Naraku needs to get his dick sliced off. I pity Kagura, sex slave. Shoot, why doesn't he make a sex incarnation? Shit, I'm kinda mad that Balthazar had the wet dream. Conner needs to step the fuck down. His punk ass needs control. What is Sesshomaru thinking, trying to get Kags from the body guards? Ewan could take the shit out of him so why is he separating them? CONTINUE!
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i luv this chapter at first it was because of the sess/kag pairing i always liked couple who went against the norm but then u added your ocs and now i really want kags with one or both of them, mou its nots fair lol this story is very well written tho i was kinda surprised about the amount of ppl know kags and suports but i suppose rumours spread and all. There sure are alot of amusing encounters with jaken lol anyway keep it up and update soon ja ne
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey damn this rocks good on u for doing something dark there is to many love at first site stories and come on like that ever happens,i was gettin sick of all the silly prancing life is wonderful stuff atm cuz life is not a bed of roses,im liking the conflict nothing like alil but of jealousy and triangles to keep u in suspence ja ne xxx
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! another awesome chappie. & i cant wait for the one shots =)
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Things are getting even more interesting now! Wow, Naraku wants Kagome as a mate? Scary thought! It looks like Conner and Shessy are gonna have to throw down, and I knew a certain dark Inu had some feelings for her. Then we have Kikyo, the bitch should feel bad. I hope she gets ripped apart slowly after she gives them the message. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I wish I could just kick him in the jewels...Naraku really irks me, and I can't wait for him to get his just karma. Update soon!
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another exceptional chapter. I was reading some of the other reviews mostly to make sure I don't repeat myself and sound stupid. But I was surprised at the amount of hits on this story and only 112 reviews. I'm shocked. This is just such an unusual and riviting story and it should get much more praise and notice than it is getting.
Anyway, I really like the way the characters are starting to get lined up against each other. I think Naraku is pretty much pissing in the wind if he thinks he is going to get his hands on Kagome. With Sesshomaru, Conner and Bathalzar(?) being so territorial, ole Naraku doesn't stand a chance. Payton is just standing back and watching it unfold along with the rest of us.
I like the way Kikiyo is turning it around as well. Maybe there is hope for her yet. You have every reason to be proud of this story. Your characters are outstanding. I have never seen so many reviews for the new characters that you developed. They are mesmerizing and completely HOT. Makes me want to go to Scotland. I would love to see someone draw these guys from your descriptions. I would buy them.
I am also looking forward (?) to some oral surgery at the beginning of the year so good luck with yours. As for taking your time updating, please do. Anything worth doing is worth doing right and if you are not happy with it then you will get discouraged. Please don't. We are here waiting patiently for those beautiful chapters.
Anyway, I really like the way the characters are starting to get lined up against each other. I think Naraku is pretty much pissing in the wind if he thinks he is going to get his hands on Kagome. With Sesshomaru, Conner and Bathalzar(?) being so territorial, ole Naraku doesn't stand a chance. Payton is just standing back and watching it unfold along with the rest of us.
I like the way Kikiyo is turning it around as well. Maybe there is hope for her yet. You have every reason to be proud of this story. Your characters are outstanding. I have never seen so many reviews for the new characters that you developed. They are mesmerizing and completely HOT. Makes me want to go to Scotland. I would love to see someone draw these guys from your descriptions. I would buy them.
I am also looking forward (?) to some oral surgery at the beginning of the year so good luck with yours. As for taking your time updating, please do. Anything worth doing is worth doing right and if you are not happy with it then you will get discouraged. Please don't. We are here waiting patiently for those beautiful chapters.