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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
were u planning on continuing the story?. please do consider it. let me know if u do decide to cilla_0198@yahoo.com
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's fuck and you know it i cant wait for thar long are you crazy i love this story and you make me
wait fuck this see you in Feb. if i don't for get about this so call FAIRYTALE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SORRY I NEEDED TO GET THAT OUT LOVE THE STORY MAKE IT VERY BAD AND SEXY
wait fuck this see you in Feb. if i don't for get about this so call FAIRYTALE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SORRY I NEEDED TO GET THAT OUT LOVE THE STORY MAKE IT VERY BAD AND SEXY
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really luved ur story!!!!!! it's really good, although um, i have one question, why is it when the charrecters r speaking there's no quotation marks. Not to complain or anything, it just makes it kind of hard to fallow. I really don't mean to pile up any work or anything... i really luv your story and all, and the grammer mistakes, don't worry about them... i make them all the time in my stories, they can just complain, u really don't have to change them...anyways looking forward to ur update! Thanx 4 reading this review!
Hellsfire Alchemist
Hellsfire Alchemist
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What ever happened to grammar? Don't you even proofread this?
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it
more more more!!!!!
more more more!!!!!
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So fucken cool i love it so fucken much up date soon cuz i love it soooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhh. UP DATE UP DATE SOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN.
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really feel that you have a good story line but the writing and grammer is horrible on this. Did u read over it beofre you posted it? quotation marks around speech would be really nice can't tell whos talking. slow down no need to move that fast. u have a good plot but it gives me a headache trying to read it.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pump pump pump puummmmmp Sesshoumaru has arrived!! nya, update soon, and just an opinion you should had have writing the song in italics because it was to read where the song ended and where the story continued
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the story was great so far keep on writing...ummm, i dont know what else to write so bye
love always
your neice!
love always
your neice!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool, update soon!