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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE! UPDATE!! I so love that chapter!!! AHHH HOW COULD U LEAVE IT THERE?!?! Anywho love it! Can't wait for the next one!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good.... but you should have prolonged the end a bit
anyway you've got a great writing style
anyway you've got a great writing style
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOA very steamy,okay now im interested.update ASAP pwease??::puppy dog eyes::
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! No matter what spelling errors you may or may not have, you need to continue writing this, it's one of the better stories on this site. I love your writing style and they way tha you keep them in character, and I'm lying in wait for the ext one! Brilliant!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, this is great! Please continue asap! I love the twist of being possessed, he can't help it right? It's not his fault, but he gets the fruits of his "labor!" Can't wait for more! Thanks so much!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah! . . . * takes deep breath * PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!! kool story^_^
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
go go you can do it write another chapter. this one was really good though there were a few grammer and speeling errors its was very well written as a whole i suggest you get a beta for you work or jsut do a once over twice just to make sure you catch all the subtle mistakes..... but that all a side because it really did not bother me at all i cant wait for another chapter
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was Hot! Well written and hada very creative plot, I loved it.
Look forward to another chater,
Chanda
Look forward to another chater,
Chanda