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for Nights of Possession

by SakuraWings

person You don't need to know
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I always thought you could still see everything while being possessed and just couldn't controll your movements...
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alvida - Glad to know you're enjoying the story! Perhaps I was a bit unclear in my description in that particular scene, but Kagome "pleasures" Inuyasha by use of her hand, so it was really just a matter of reaching behind her...plus, he was helping her! :o

As for "sadistic" and "masochistic"...I tend to get these two mixed up, so I turned to my dear old friend, Dictionary.com:

sadistic (adj) : deriving pleasure or sexual gratification from inflicting pain on another
masochistic (adj) : deriving pleasure or sexual gratification from being abused or dominated

So...if Kagome whacked Inuyasha with that vase, and assuming that they both "enjoyed" it, yes indeed, Kagome would be the sadistic one, and Inuyasha would be the masochist.

Thanks for catching that! You learn something everyday I guess... :D
person Nanoda
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how this read like before your Dec 22 edit, but it's fan-freak'n-tastic right now. Your writing style is smooth, everyone is in character, and for a first lemon (or 2nd or 3rd really), it's pretty smoke'n!!
Hopefully less impressively, you're also one of the few fanfic writers who can spell both "tongue" _and_ "thrust", apparently two of the most difficult words in the english language. ;)
I've got your story bookmarked so I don't miss the second chapter. I love it!
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Greenlie2: Either that, or Kagome's hand is small? ^^;

You don't need to know: Niiice observation! ^_~
person pat
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice to hear u updated
loved the fact that inu is now known to his problem and i think i no how they solve the problem but i wont tell
update soon
person kagome
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really good keep going and i hope that you can update sooner then ever this one i cant wayt to here from
person Memory
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I just want to say..... GREAT LEMON!! Lol, I really liked your story. You're staying true to the characters in what they do and say. You're not rushing things in your story, you have things that lead up to why this happened or why that happened. Nothing like just up and doing something. The layout of your story makes it very easy to follow. So all in all I love it! Keep up the great work! I hope to read the next chapter soon? Peace...
person lemon_ice
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really hope more comes soon! i like your story very much!
person Rinlover
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*paws at you* Updaaaate!....I need moooore! PLEAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSEEE! I'LL DIE WITHOUT AN UPDATE!
person jamie
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heyy that was good... put up sum more... email me if and when u do