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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Definite improvement over the first chapter. I really liked the way that you described the ending scene of inu chasing and then collapsing. It was very well done. And as for all your chapters ending with Inuyasha on top of Kagome, there are worse ways to end a chapter!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i don't know if i ever reviewed for the first chapter, i read it a while ago. but i love the story, it's great. i feel so bad for those poor ghosts! man, talk about tragedy. very well written and i love the intro with miro and sango finding poor kag and inu in such a state of...undress? LMAO. that was great. i love how you've written Miroku, he's halirious. very well done. sad that it's gonna be so short, but still all together a great story!!!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* Ahh, lemony fresh! More please! Lovely.
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is to coinsidental. I use Yumiko for the majority of the things I do! I even have a website and everything*shivers* creepy...... Anyway this is a really cool story and its very original! Like one of the stories that would astually make sence or that in the end will leave you with a warm fuzzy feeling (and I mean more then just the one between your legs. Lol!) i cant wait for the next chapter and I hope you did well on your exams!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lone saiyan woman - Oh my, no, not related to the grudge at all. I haven't even seen that movie, actually...if anything, it's loosely based on a romance novel that I read a couple of months ago about a paranormal events investigator. And if you know romance novels...they are pretty much guaranteed a happy ending. :]
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was damn good one question though, was this story adopted from the grudge pls answer?: coz i had an unnerving dream about the grudge just yesterday lol(dunno y? :S) and if this story is rlated 2 it i will b officially freaked, it seems 2 share the same storyline
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good story, i'm interested now, please update soon...
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow your back! I really loved this story and can't wait to read more. YOu do a wonderful job writing, and looking forward to reading more when you can! Thanks much!
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter but I had a couple of comments. Maybe it's just because I am old and inflexible but Kagome "pleasuring" Inuyasha while he was sitting behind her sounded awfully awkward to me. Also, in chapter 2 when Kagome hurls the whatsit at Inuyasha wouldn't Inuyasha think she was being "sadistic" rather than "masochistic"?
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HE'S THAT BIG?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Please continue.
Please continue.