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that was terrific! i mean, obviousley i HATED what happened, like you said, poor inuyasha! poor kagoame! ugh, that would be aweful! you have to update again soon!!

oh, also i think that it is excellent that you dont have the ghosts wife in kagoame, i think that that would e an entirely different story i dont think that id enjoy it as much! so good call there, in my opinion

GET THE FUCK OUTTTTTTTTA HERE!!!!!!!!!!!

She really called out the other one's name? OH SHIT!
Can we say cold? But then again...

Was InuYasha being himself? OR was he being the ghost?
Or was it a little of both again? This is seriously fucked!
I love it -woot!!! Next chappppp!

......*wishes she could strangle you at the moment* GRRR!!!!! please?!?! update soon!?! I really love this story!

PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^ DATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO C WUT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^

Hey there, inu hanyou nikkie!

I'm glad you like the story. As for your concern regarding the N/C aspect of the story, I was bordering on whether or not to add the warning to the list. Your concerns are legit and I understand if you are offended by the material.

I ultimately decided against it, because Kagome does have ultimate control over Inuyasha through use of the rosary. If she really didn't like what was going on, she'd just "osuwari" him into next week and run for help. But in this story, during the first encounter, she is intrigued by the attention that he normally does not give her. In the second encounter, she "loses" herself, and forgets all about ghosts and whatnot. I guess I can't say much more without spoiling the end...

Inuyasha is there, but in a dreamlike state more than anything else. And like dreams, you cannot really control what happens until you feel strong emotions (kind of like waking up from a nightmare).

As for Miroku, he did not purposely set out to destroy his friends' relationship. It was simply an accident. Also, he does not know too much about what happened between Inuyasha and Kagome. All he knows is that Inuyasha ended up in bed with Kagome naked. Kagome herself is not upset or crying, so naturally he figures nothing too serious has occured.

And I really, really, don't like darkfics (unless highly recommended). They often leave me with a slight distaste in my mouth. So no, this will not be a darkfic, and I can guarantee you a (somewhat) happy ending for my favorite couple.

At your suggestion, I'll tack on a "slight N/C" warning. :)

I like it so far... you have a good talent and a good plot going on. I find you have a very smooth flow to your story and a lot of intrigue. . . . . but I think you might need to add the code N/C (non-consentual) to the story.. As Kagome DOES NOT want the possessed hanyou to do sexual things to her.. (she wants Inuyasha himself) this ghost he is bordering on being a near crimninal.. This ghost threatens Kagome to bend to his will and NOT do anything to defend herself by saying he doesn't know what the Hanyou will do while being possessed.... therefore he threatened HER LIFE and the lives of her friends if she didn't STOP fighting him. To me that is crimninal- threatening someone's life to get what you want....I have been in the situation before and it isn't remotely sexy nor can a person control their bodies reactions. I kind of feel you are trying to make the non consentual scenes to be something romantic and sexy.. I don't think you are trying to glorify the unpleasant subject on purpose.. but that is how it is seeming to be coming across... This ghost oblivious cannot take NO for an answer. (he really needs to have someone kick his sorry ass to the seven hells) And this is the reasoning behind adding the Non-Consentual code. I don't want this to seem a flame.. I hope it doesn't come across as one.. I apologize if it does seem as one... I am trying to aim for constructive critism - I just wanted to let you know - In case some readers who are very touchy about the subject attack the story. . I also hope that Miroku gets his punishment for causing the destruction of his two friends relationship. He doesnt seem to find any wrongness in what he has done. It seemed he was entertained by the notion. Will he be punished? And Inuyasha... if he is aware of all that is going on... why isn't he aware that Kagome does not want to do these things....that the ghost had threatened Kagome with his body/attack or is he being so dense right now that he doesn't see what is before his eyes? Is this going to be a darkfic? Will Inuyasha get the chance to beat the crud out of this ghost for what he has done?? Will Kagome??? How will Miroku ever make this up to his friends???

That was good!!! I can't wait till the next chapter!!

WOW I'm amazed by the route this story is taking, so glad you update now... it's taking you a long time to do so... but i'm glad you're almost finishing it.
Keep on working hard that mind of yours...cause what you write is just awsome!!!!

Noooo! that was mean! Poor InuYasha. I wonder what made Kagome say "Hiroshi"? There is a ghost in her, too, perhaps? :)