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by hColleen

person tinkle time kelly
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice little one shot. I like the way you paired up two of my fravorite demons and kept them in character,they were created in (Manga/Animie).Not all links to pics work I only got to see one.
person Hoshi-chan
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story just plain rocks. I love the Youko=uke idea that is so rarely used...

I really love the pairing too, the silver-haired bishies are a drool bucket-worthy image in my mind... And Sessy taking Youko down a peg. Points for that too...

^_^ I luv it.
person Anon
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well done! and yeah, the pics were nice. good idea to put them in there!
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WooHoooooo !!!!!!! Go Yoko, Go Yoko! Give it to that puppy. How fun and hot. The detail was perfect in the lemon. Sess didn't stand a chance, lol. The pictures were great. It's so wonderful to have a vision as well as the written text. You've done yourself proud, H. I also found it fun that Yoko was much younger than most people portray him as. That was a brilliant touch. And I think Sess was perfectly in character for the situation. Oh I just love reading your stuff.