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for Sweet Revenge

by Nelsonbannaba

person Fara
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it
person kiesha
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You should really hurry and put sesshomaru and rin into play.
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am such a sicko i gross myself out sometimes. i was reading this fic in the hopes of havning a janken/kouga lemon....hehehe. i can't help myself. i like your description about when kouga was making his choice and was like which would be more humilating..it made me laugh. I did think you were going into a graphic picture of the hour under jankens care...i though kouga/janken and then as things went on i though 'ooo. seme!janken"...and then it was like oh. i liked it though it was funny, i just wish we saw something more like...what do the other wolves do when kouga shows up smelling like janken..hehe oh the akwerdness!
person weepinglotus
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O - O This has to be one of the most interesting and original pairings I've ever read.
person smittin kittin (nlo)
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know who’s more twisted, u 4 writing this or me 4 loving it! lol this is really a well written perversion of the Inuyasha universe bravo 4 u pulling it off! i'm off now 2 have the lobotomy that will rid my brain of the nasty imagery u’ve conjured up! Thanks 4 sharing this disturbingly funny fic!
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell! *Shifty eyes* I really do love alternate pairings--But... you really go way out of the realm of alternate parings. My gawd, I have read another story from you, of Jaken being all Jaken-ey! That line of him licking his beak suggestively, ohss the horrible mental imagery I received from that! Gahhhhh! Okay I'm a sicko, I actually enjoyed this. Loved the banter between the two of them. Now to go wash my eyes out with some lye soap! And peek at the other one-shot of this series.
person zyn1213
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ummm...that was both hilarious and scaring.