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for Battle of Wills (revised)

by zeeScarlet

person Badkitty
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kagome is funny when she's drunk! I'm loving this story, I can't wait to see who ske picks. I personally hope it is Sesshoumaru but we'll have to wait and see. Update soon :)
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Another great update. You know, my favorite episode EVER of Inu Yasha that I've seen so far is Episode 35 when Sesshoumaru saves Rin. His eyes are so soft and gentle that I just wanna melt into a puddle of female hormones right in front of my TV... I love the fact that Sesshoumaru is so unattainable, yet he's so close to Kagome. It's really a great story! Waiting for the next update.
person Rinseternalsoul
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You certainly are quick on the updates. Putting me to shame. This writer's block is killing me, but it obviously isn't effecting you in the least. The last two chapters were great. The Truth or Dare game had me on pins and needles the whole time. It was sexy, but I was continuously wondering if Sesshomaru was going to catch them! ARGH! So now the well isn't working, and she finds herself moved into Sesshomaru's home. I suppose if I had a choice of 'the hot guy with a castle' or 'the hot guy with a really great tree', I would chose the guy with the castle. Mom always told me that love doesn't put food on the table. She was so right. Since Kagome thinks she may love Sesshomaru, she should just give in and accept his handsome body into her bed. Ahhh... Well, that is, unless she can have them both. Now that would be a 'two for the price of one deal' that I couldn't pass up! Enough rambling by me. Til next time~
person Badkitty
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the most original kag/sess stories I have read. It has become one of my favorites and I find the I can hardly wait to read the next chapter. I love the mixture of comedy and romance and the way everything in the story works together. I can't wait to see what you have instore for kagome & shessy, I hope that the inu gang are able to see him again and accept him and Kagome being together. I feel kinda bad for Inuyasha, but oh well. Please update soon!
person Rinseternalsoul
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I see there has been some major additions and deductions from the story. I like it though. I feel bad for Inuyasha, but I so loved Sesshomaru's torment of Kagome while the hanyou was so near. It will be interesting to see where the story goes from here. Til next time~

Rinseternalsoul
person Megan Consoer
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person pixie
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One word... HOT. Hope this gets updated soon, its amazing! ^___^
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another great chapter. I'm enjoying the interaction between Kagome and Inu Yasha. True, I'm a Sesshoumaru freak, but there's something so simple and beautiful about the chemistry between Inu Yasha and Kags that warms my heart. I think you've caught the essence of Inu Yasha nicely, but he was always a little gruffer than this if I remember right. Anyway, great job! Waiting for the next update!
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! I'm not much of a reviewer because I'm pretty picky about which stories I read, but this story had me smiling, panting, laughing, and going "awwwwwwwwwwww" at the same time. I love it. :) Great job! Can't wait for your next update, sweetpea! Arigato!
person amoraluv
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really cute
keep typin