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for Battle of Wills (revised)

by zeeScarlet

person Megan Consoer
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this new version of the story but I do like the other version as well. The only thing I did not like before was the fact that it was left open. The new scenes are awesome but I'm not totally into the Inu/Kag stuff. I can't wait to see where you're going with this. Keep up the good work.
person Scarlet
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WRITERS BLOCK... *sighs* Whatever wonderful chemical imbalance had occured to make my words flow so freely before, has suddenly stopped. Suddenly I find everything I type superficial and forced, which makes for really crappy story lines. I'm not sure if I'll keep the last chapter I've added here or not, but it may be a little while before I continue with this story. I'll definately be on the boards, but I thought I would let my readers know since I'm now going from writing 2 chapters a day to writing one paragraph, becoming completely disgusted with what I've written and quickly discarding it. I will eventually finish this story I promise, but for now.....time to read and regroup..*nod nod*

Hug and Kisses! Scarlet
person Rinseternalsoul
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice lemon. I just LOVED the 'demon side' of Sesshomaru pressing him on. It was extremely sexy. Nice job.
person Scarlet
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SHHHHH!...Its a secret..all though I will tell you while I was writing this the ending came to me..along with all the stuff that will happen inbetween :P..we are a good 10 chapters from the end...but...once the ending came to me I was like AWWWWWWWWW...so hopefully you will too :P
person Snowfall
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very hot lime. Too bad it had to end.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person Snowfall
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It will be interesting to see how it all plays out with Sess being invisible to Inuyasha and how Kagome will resolve that conflict. A threesome? Hihi

Snowfall
person snowfall
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was cute. A drunken Kagome. But shame on Sess. She might not remember what he said. At least he respects her need for space. Nice chapter.

Snowfall
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heya, Girlie!!!

Well, just a couple of things for today's review!

One, I'm not sure that Sesshoumaru would admit his love so freely to Kagome, although it would be a nice little facet to his already complex character. You know I was thinking that Sesshoumaru actually broke and became compassionate after the death of Kagura. Maybe this is part of that, ne?

schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit to something....I hate kagura..*hangs head in shame*..In most of my fics...you wont' even see her mentioned..even if it made sense...she's too..I dunno.....She wants my sesshy dammit!!....My "sesshy formula" if you will is that he's an ubber snuggly teddy bear with a gruff exterior he puts up to keep people out. The whole I love you thing will be interesting later on and you'll see why...but...the actual saying I love is different for different people...My theory was ..he was caught up in the moment...so...will he say it again?...Mebee not...will Kagome remember?...Oooooo I dunno...guess we'll have to wait and see :P