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for Dark Horizons

by Raythe

person Princess Sin
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, i had nothing else to
do so i reread this wonderful
story over again and it is still
absolute one of the greatest stories
i have ever read. i do so hope you
will continue it. because it is too
good a story to leave unfinished.
person DemonGoddess
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I completely agree with Princess Sin. This is very well written, and too good to just ...stop... where it is.
person DemonGoddess
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! You certainly have a way with words! This is a wonderfully told story so far. =)
person vampress
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW, really entertaining story. Now all it needs is more chapters soon;)
person Jade
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the best Inu/Sess story that I have ever read. I read all chapters (1-10) in one sitting! I love your portrayal of the characters, you keep all of them true to themselves and they're not OCC. I definitely love Sess being strong and loving towards Inu. I like how Kagome started to accept the relationship and definitely like that Sango supported them. And each sexual tension, conversations and actions between Inu and Sess were sooooo hot! Definitely very curious about the Ancient that's coming to Earth. I really hope that you are continuing this series and I would love to keep reading. Please do update at your convenience, I know writing can sometimes be hard. ^^ Fantastic job over all!
person SparkAngel
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, i totally glad i can across this fic. its so great^_^
i hope you continue this.
person wendyghost
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i been looking for your story! its good! really good! im glad i found it
person Deity
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was thinking about this story the other day....and seeing it updated the next day is kind of strange.....^_^ Anyway, I'm so happy you did, I really love this story and the plot! Heh, well......god my brain's dead. All I can really say for this chapter is that it was written wonderfully and I loved it.....Ecpecially the end. I'm sure everyone's been waiting for that! That was written really well too. ^_^ Well, update again, as soon as you can. Uh....but take your time and I'll, as others will be too I'm sure, be waiting. ^_^ Keep up the good work and until your next chapter comes out, Bye! ^_^
person Answers
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the long awaited sex scene. It was really good, great infact. But i always have this thought that the first time should be more about love then actual pleasure.

I know it's corny but it should be slow and sweet, truly showing their love. You wrote this really well, dont get me wrong, to me it just came across more of a causual thing, or a type of sex scene that youd have in a more established relationship. But i love your story and the suspense about the ancient (i think i spet that wrong) is killing me. I also love love love love love love love your other stories, especially Forbidden, and i hope you update them again soon!
Please update soon and i'll reveiw again!!!!!!!!!!
person The Seeker
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He shook his hair back behind his shoulders and felt Sesshoumaru’s ARMS tighten about him.