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for WhipLash

by blackcatt930

person Anon
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was really good. but you couldve done better by telling us more on how inuyasha and kagome met and how things ended up the way they were after she slapped him. the ending could also use some work as it is too fast and non-descriptive. but other then that it was great! thanks for the story ^_^
person nox
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a hot one! Thanks for the one shot
person a lost soul
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I do have to say, that was exciting.
person suki
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really good make a sequal please
person STAR OF DEATH
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Meena Vangel
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... that was fantastic... pleaz write more... if you are going to post an other chapter... pleaz infor meh at meh e-mail address.. :)
person Whip Lash
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whew... that was interesting... you are a great writer... i really liked the story... please infor me at my e-mail... adress when you are going to put the next episode up... ;)
person Paradiseboy
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice one shot! OOC though
person Twilight
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice I like it