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Enlighten me, what was the point of the whole "Japanese" conversation? I can't see the point of the conversation that could not have been held in English. Most people don't approach asian people and pick a language, and hope that they're going to respond in kind. I kinda... didn't like it. At all. No offense to you as a person, but more of you as a writer. A bit (read: a lot) of polish and some (read: a lot) more work and it'll be alright.

Btw, "slang" is rather difficult to read. At least use apostrophes to show missing letters. That and punctuation is good. For example, thoughts can be enclosed in single quotation marks, that kind of basic thing.

no offence to anyone who may out this but dont let rin get pregnant.. that happens in sooo many storys ppl will think its unorigonal. now its different if u get her pregnant and he denys the baby but that is also common. maybe have one of her 'crew' members turn on her and attack her? nobody will exspect it and its origional. maybe have naraku come into it or rin get shot (since shes hard an shit.) or... maybe have kagura come back and shoot her? theres some ideas hope to see an update!!

Yo shit is tight! Im lovin dis story and fuck those bitches they say shit on your reviews shit Im a Beaner just like break so i know wat u taking about XD and for those Stoopid mother fukers that do not like whats in this story then how about this DON'T READ IT it's as simple as that don't get mad and start writing crap about its a bad story just stop reading and find something that is allowed in your little boxed world... I'll be waiting for your next chapter ^ ^

i love it that was one of the best inu fics i read please update soon

i think there should be some type of drama, like a twist in the story or somethin. im not sure what but i really would like to see some drama and a twist in the story. but i love the story so far!!! please whenever u can update soon

i love your story and i think you should have Rin get pregnant XD or maybe have it look like Sess cheat on Rin and her watching that or have Sess find out he's engaged XD those are just ideas but i do hope you continue with this story it is really good

AWw.. I really like this fic.. please continue!! update soon and yes ha i have seen x3 that was really funny when he said that to kitty lol .. but yes.. LOVE IT.. update!

you had better keep righting bitch

Wahoo! You finally updated! Man, I waited forever! I love the slang, it's great, makes me laugh. And Sessh, the way he acts... You really got his character down. Like the lemon, BTW. Thanks, I needed it today. lmao

OMG OMG OMG.............YIPPY ANOTHER UPDATE.............I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH......PLEASE DON'T STOP.