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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yo go girl this is da bomb. im loving this, hope kagura gets whats coming to her without Rin getting into any trouble for it ofcourse.
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February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude I love this story. You add flavor to something that has been getting a little tedious for me. Keep on Keepin on!
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February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay I just read some of the other reviews and that shit is bogus. They shouldn't read it if it bothers them. If they get offended but keep reading it's no one fault but their own. I'm not saying people feelings are irrelevant but honestly don't purposely put yourself in positions to get pissed off. Get over yourself. Anyway, I can't wait for the next installment. To quote a great write..."Write what you know." and I think you do that wonderfully.
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I want to say is WOW! I am very much overwhelmed with this story. Dont cha worry, I think that the "ghetto stuff' is pretty cool ... keep up d gud work and TC! keep updatin' cuz I really can't wait what wil hap[pen next ... ;)
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story!!!!! i am soo relieved that you haven't forgotten about us reviewers.....please update soon!!!!!!!!!
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No shit sistah, this motha be offn the hook!!! Sorry, just my ebonics kicking in. I'm an Irish American white girl who was born in Gary IN. I know just how you feel, I grew up in TN and Brentwood, outside of Nashville, is a BIG hip hop club area. I can blend in anywhere, most of the students at my school were either African American, Phillipino, or Korean. So BELIEVE ME I know.
All that aside, I think this is a marvelous turn on the story. Sesshy is really touching yet still aloof. I really am enjoying your work here and hope that your medical issues clear up and you don't end up dirt nappin'. Man that shit would be too fuct up fo sho. LOL!
Hope you feel better and get the chance to update!
Holly S
All that aside, I think this is a marvelous turn on the story. Sesshy is really touching yet still aloof. I really am enjoying your work here and hope that your medical issues clear up and you don't end up dirt nappin'. Man that shit would be too fuct up fo sho. LOL!
Hope you feel better and get the chance to update!
Holly S
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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
word son... dont stop this. i love how you get the street life rapped into this story u got goin. It remindes of my old home in New york. please dont stop. hit me up when u get this.
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love the story!!!! hate the cliffy! lol update when ya can
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey it me again...well i agree your little eader note but does that for you to stop writting? well look I will make it simple, I like your story and i would like to read the end before I...before I... ok what ever...juste get it done please.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hay i like ya story becaues the way rin and T talks.I live in calif and we do talk like the poeple in yo story so ya keep wirte'in dis shit.