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Gurl! Continue this! Keep going with this story! And don't worry about those other people. Write for who you are.

please please update asap please please

ha ha ha your story is off the hinges (smile) favorit things to do is dance and sing so I am really feeling your story. (smile)

please please please update this

Should I give up on you updating this?

Hello random person! I like your story alot! I'd also like to say that I personally don't give a fuck whether you decide to put supposedly 'racial' shit in your story. I mean, if you are writing a story about hiphop and people from the ghetto they should talk the right way. If not how would that make you look? It make you out to be an uneducated poser who doesn't know shit about what theyre gettin into. Don't apologize for writing your story the way you want to write it. To hell if it offends people! If they're offended that's there problem. And while we're at it, who gives a shit if they think 'nigga' is racial? I happen to be white (gag me) and I have felt like shooting people for they're racist comments. I have friends who are from the ghetto, (cool people) in fact, my ex was the leader of a mafia. I call my friends 'nigga' all the time. Like you said, it depends on how you use it. Your crew is your family and depending on how you use the word is how its taken. (I know from experience... *shudders at memory*) Well, I gotta be leaving now! See ya! Please update soon! --Junko

I REALLY like this story!!! I love how you put a different culture mix with it!!! Please update soon!

hehe! i love your storie and i hope to read the next chapeters soon ...( before krismas)....well it good, am curious of what will happen next

Yo I love this story and I hope you update it soon. And please, you're a great writer so don't even worry about what those punk-ass flames say. I like the fact that you ain't scared to use the "N" word in your stories. As for yall out there who do have a problem with it, let me remind you of something. Calling each other by the "N" word (and I know it because I'm black) is part of black culture. It might not be the best element of our culture but its part of it all the same. And as for yall saying shit like she makes black people look bad, we blacks aren't the only ones saying the "N" word and yall know it. Where I grew up, it didn't matter if you were black, white, asian, hispanic, arab, or anything. Whenever you said hi to someone, you said, "Wudd up niggah." Obviously, the author knows it too considering she writes about Rin saying the "N" word. So quit all your bitching about it. She already said she ain't gonna stop putting it in her stories. So god damn, if you have a problem with it, read another story. Last I checked, she wasn't holding a gun to your head, making you read her fic. And yall who have a problem with her saying the thing about Japanese people hating to be mistaken for Chinese people, give it a fucking rest. She was just pointing out a fact, not trying to give a sermon. Yall who had a problem with the fact that she didn't say the vice-versa, I thought this story was about JAPANESE people. Not Chinese, not Korean, Japanese people. In my opinion yall people who keep flaming her for that are just using up space on this site with your useless attempts to try and put a good writer down. So you know the solution: If you don't like what she writes then don't read it. Personally, after the obsessive bitching, I think that you reading this story is an insult to the author's talent.

Once again, I hope you update soon. I'm out.

NICE chap. keep working on it n.n