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I liked it. Hope you update soon.

interesting, me likey. umm as for a suggestion...can't think of any at the moment. keep up the good work

hey congrats on your first fanfic. its really good i'll keep reading if you keep writing.

Hi!
My name is Linda. This is your first fic? I would not believe it. About Sess OOC - well not too much, only in the way he try to bed a nimgen. The first chapter seems to be good. Will you continue and update soon? I am curious about how the story will continue. I don´t think you made mistakes in it is good. To tell more it needs time and one chapter is not enough to tell how the story is. About rape, I don´t know it this should happen, but itœ to you. Lissen to me! It is your story and you should write, what you feel is good, but it is nice of zou to ask the opinion of the other, so to the rape: I don´t think, that rape is honorable and Sess would do such athink, but mey be it fits in the story. Please don´t make the story too sad. I hate it, when I have to cry to much and please write me back if you have time.
Sorry for my english Linda

Well, I will say this, It's a good first chapter. Right away you hook the reader and draw us in, and that's the problem with most writing nowadays is nobody know's how to hook them right away. Very good. I like the plot you're spinning, this is definately interesting and if you decide to post more, be assured that I shall read it.
Best of luck go with you, and all teh Muses
ivorycoral

I LOVED IT. UPDATE SOON!