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Please update soon

please update soon

i loved your story so far! please keep it up and if possible, could you e-mail me at ohsnap_theresa@yahoo.com once you've updated? thanks in advance and keep it up!! :)

I am glad to hear that you will be continuing this story, because I am hooked on it!

Okay, I understand that you are reviewing, but please hurry. Or at least put up new chapter and then redo the whole story. I'm not the only one hurting for the end of this story. Does he take Kagome as his own? Did Sesshoumaru notify Kagome the reason for his actions? I think she should accidentaly listen in on a converation that Sesshoumaru has with his ward Rin over the situation. I also think that Kagome should escape, then run into Inuyasha only to realize that he has become his full demon self permanently and mated to a female demon because of who he is. Heck, maybe Shippou should be all grown up and trying to mate with Kagome as well after he has gotten over his 'mother' issues. Throw a little mix up in the seven day thing. Make kagome want to go back home. Do something! I feel like there is no point in keeping an eye on this story. Please don't make me give this story up.

aww man

its getting good please update soon

Great Stuff! If you're still looking for a beta I'll do it. And since my first novel came out of an RPG for my fiancee using one of his characters well I can handle bouncing ideas around and RPing 'em out of necessary!

update soon

well, if you need someone to read your work,
and do grammar and spelling, i could help you do that.

however, i work - and sometimes work is - shall we say
more demanding than at other times.

but if you dont mind those times, i usually do a quick turn-around.
but your choice.

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now with the story, it is fascinating to see how Sess could be made to want Kags.
technically in canon, Kags is really Inu's (when he's not being stupid).
you've made an excellent foundation doing that, i am curious to see if you will add more....