rate_review Reviews

Now this is what I call a lemon ^_^ I am so glad it wasn't weak like a lot of sesshomaru+rin fics I have read.

Can you do another? Pretty please ^^

I like this. If you decide to write another fic on them, can you give it a plot? It doesn't have to be a big plot. Also, in your lemon, for the parts where you say he/she whines... I think whimper would sound better. But overall this lemon is awesome. Keep it up!

I love your fic and this couple. Write another!

This fic is awesome. I love it! The song that played through my head was "Waiting For Tonight" by Jennifer Lopez. Keep up the great work and write another Sesshomaru+Rin fic. For the next, get more naughty with it ^^ knowing Sesshomaru... (chuckles) he is an all nighter ^_^ he wouldn't let Rin sleep. He'd bang her good and she'd shed tears of pleasure. ^_^ Everyone in feudal Japan would know Sesshomaru is pleasing his mate because she would be screaming that loud :). I totally see them doing: doggie style, regular position with either on top, foreplay, masturbation duet, oral sex, and sesshomaru effortlessly lifting Rin as he slams her up and down upon his rod - her back is to him and she is in his laps. Yep things would get REAL naughty with them. Have you seen the 3rd movie of InuYasha? Sesshomaru looks like his dad ^_^. But anyway, I love the lemon! Your good.

Me like this! I request you do another!

You rule! ^_^ I enjoyed reading.

Oh my gosh, its a Sesshomaru+Rin lemon that's not flowery weak. NICE! You must write another!

Your lemon is saucy ^^ hehe I like that.

Well I'm glad you didn't do a crappy job like most Sesshomaru+Rin lemon writers. I hope you write another and give it a plot. PWP are fine but its also nice to read a lemon with a plot. Just make sure you don't totally fall out of character. Its ok, to get a little out of character but turning Rin into a gangster, slut, or something stupid like that is so annoying to readers... trust me.