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Good, its so saucy. I like this ^_^ I wish I was Rin. I hope to see another lemon on these two soon.

Well its nice to read a hot lemon with no yaoi or yuri to it.

You are talentive when it comes to hot sex scenes.

I request you write another sexy Sesshomaru+Rin lemon because you certainly know how to do one without leaving readers dissapointed. Your a good writer, keep it up.

Well, what can I say? It's a very passionate fic ^^ I love when Sesshomaru asks Rin to say his name - and only his name. Compliments!

COOL!!!!!!

Wow, that was hot. ^^ Hehehe, I love this couple and I love this lemon. It is a great read... now I need to find my boyfriend :). Hey I have a request, since your so good when it comes to lemon scenes, why not write another great lemon like this with a plot? I was curious if you could write a InuYasha fic that was AU with: InuYasha, Sesshomaru, Kagome, Sango, Miroku, Rin, Kouga, Ayame, Shippo, Kikyo (maybe others...) in highschool. I like InuYasha highschool fics and every one that I have read have dissapointed me because either the characters are horribly out of character, the lemon is weak, or the story is just plain crap. But reading this fic of yours, I can tell you'd do an awesome job. So what do you think? My request/challenge is to write an InuYasha AU highschool fic with the InuYasha+Kagome, Miroku+Sango, Sesshomaru+Rin, (maybe others...) couples. They are all teenagers, (I don't like rin being a student and dating a teacher sesshomaru) and: Shippo - Rin- Ayame can be a 9th graders, Kagome - Sango a 10th grader, InuYasha - Miroku - Kikyo can be 11th graders, and Sesshomaru - Kouga can be 12th graders. Kouga being a jock in school is the perfect role for him ^_^. Sesshomaru would be off to himself I guess what you would call a loner, Miroku of course would be popular and a ladies man, InuYasha would probably be a punk since he is considered an outcast on the human and demon side, I can't think about the others right now but I'm sure you'll come up with something. Oh yes, ^^ make InuYasha, Shippo, Kouga, Ayame, and Sesshomaru humans so they can sorta blend in with the school. I guess a black haired human InuYasha would be fine ^_^ as for Sesshomaru, he can keep the lovely silver-white hair but ditch the elf looking ears, the markings on his face, the sharp claws, his big fluffy thing he walks around in, and that lavender moon. Perhaps he can wear his hair in a pony tail like his father so he looks something like this:

http://groups.msn.com/LordoftheWesternLands/sesshoumaruandrin.msnw?action=ShowPhoto&PhotoID=481

Just copy and paste the link. I hope you do consider my request/challenge because personally I think if you did a AU high school fic with a plot with those 3 couples I mention and others if you decide to add any, this would get you DOZENS of reviews. Make the chapters interesting and catchy, doesn’t have to be super long but don’t make each chapter too short. Put Romance/Humor/Drama in it and of course lemon and lime which would make it NC-17. I have confidents in your abilities. Also as far as Shippo goes, I can see the teen version of him through this picture:

http://www.linsdomain.com/otherworld/pictures/shippo3.jpg

^_^ Get creative with it and stay in character please!

Brilliant work! Happy Halloween and write another please!

Ooh write another Sesshoumaru+rin lemon. Yours is great!

I totally love these two together. Nice work!