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for Hedonism

by Adelsan

person Jerry
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Some good stuff man, now write some more!
person Flowergirl
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was wild and pretty! I hope you write another because your good! =)
person Maki-san
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow (blushes) um, well-written lemon. Better than most I've read.
person Stargirl
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well its nice to find a sweet lemon on this couple. I'm glad you didn't have Sesshomaru raping her or him having sex with her as a child. Fics like that on them need to be burned and the author needs to be slap for writing dumb shit like that. Those who know Sesshomaru and are not screwed in the head know the Lord of the western lands would NEVER do some sick crap like that. (shakes head) But as the days pass, the world gets sicker every minute. Nice work with this lemon and keep up the great work!
person Kotsu
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So when are you going to post up another lemon?
person Blackstone
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your lemon was spicy, I like that. Good work and congradulations for having the most reviews on only 1 chapter. ^_^
person Jada
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WRITE ANOTHER!
person bluefire
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've searched for a decent Rin+Sesshomaru fic to read and I'm glad I ran into yours. Good work here, your a nice writer. :) The more and more criticism I hear about the Rin+Sesshomaru couple not meant to be the more I found myself on the floor laughing. They think just because they're hardcore InuYasha fans that it gives them the right to act as the owner of the series. LOL, they wish but too bad for them they don't own it ^_^. Keep up the good work and ignore lame flamers and assholic critics.
person China
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write more very soon please!
person animegirl007
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SWEET!!!!! DAMN THAT WAS HOT!!!!!!!!! There not much more I can say but good job......I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!