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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ Teehee, I had so much fun reading.
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I can certainly see why everyone is reviewing your fic because its GOOD. Nice work! Its hard to come across lemons that are this good in this section.
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...nice story, hee hee, well..I was wondering though, what does the title means by any chance. Hee hee, other than that, keep up your wonderful again sometime ne? ^_^`
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I agree with that GlitterMAGIC chick, maybe you should take on her request or challenge. You would do pretty good I bet. But anyway I enjoyed this PWP, its was... H-O-T!
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, ^_^ you did great!
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot lemon, nice. If you take on that Glitter person's challenge, make sure you take your time and sort everything out so it sounds perfect to you.
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was too lazy to sign in, but I stumbled across this lemon and read and all I have to say is... DAMN! Your good ^_^ I hope you write more.
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, very good. I don't usually read PWP but I read yours and it was pretty good. If you decide to write another, make sure you: take your time with the lemon, be descriptive, watch what words you use, correct as many mistakes as you can find, and have fun with it. Great work and I hope to read another lemon on this couple since this is my favorite one.
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. This is a great PWP, now if it had a plot it would be even better but I still like this. I'm glad you didn't have Sesshomaru raping her or having sex with her when she is sick or gonna die... I'm sorry but those type of lemons are stupid to me. I would never want to be screwed in my dying hours, I'd be scared of leaving this world instead of getting horny -_-. But anyway your lemon is great. ^_^ Sesshomaru doesn't strike me as the raping or pedophilia type, his personality tells me he wouldn't degrade himself to such things.
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE!