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by Adelsan

person sfgvsdg
schedule February 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
sesshomaruandrin.blogspot.com
sesshomaruandkagura.blogspot.com
person Bojack727
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good. This was an excellent little story. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
person fluffysgirl802005
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
all i have to say is...........

damn that was hot...

oh how i wish i was rin!
person Perverted Priestess
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Marvalous now I understand why this story got 5 stars in the rating.*starts crying*I'm sorry its just that I wish I could write good stories like you*sniff*.
Inuyasha-Why are you crying
Perverted Priestess-Its nothing its just that the story you were in with Kagome was so good it touched my perverted heart.
Inuyasha-I didnt think it was that great.
Perverted Priestess-you dont think so because you have a cold heart!*holds up a bow and arrow and points it to Inuyasha's head*
Inuyasha-What are you going to do with that*runs away*
Perverted Priestess-*runs after him*Keep writing!XD
person Perverted Priestess
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I thought this was a Kagome and Inuyasha fic
Sesshomaru&Inuyasha-Idiot!
person Werwolfie
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This probably is one of the best sess/rin fics in the entire sections. Quality & few spelling errors. If you make a sequel, make his personality harder and more dog like. growl instead os purr. BUT STILL great story!
person Greystars
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
are you going to write more or not?
person Jessica
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN IT, write more!
person Forest
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you write another soon.
person Hehehe
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just got through from reading the reviews of an author who decided to portray Sesshomaru as a rapist/pedopilier to Rin and I couldn't stop laughing because the author deleted all of the flamers reviews then blew off some steam by reviewing her own fic and wasting space in her review box. Some people really forget what review means, seriously, if they want to yell at people take it to e-mail not here but then if they did that I wouldn't get the satisfaction of laughing at their idiocy. What that reviewer Karin said right after the author blew off steam, I agree... if your going to stomp and kick just because the critcism you get is something you don't want to hear then stop writing if your TOO sensitive to handle that. Sheesh, that is what a lot of people don't even criticize because when a person does and they only mean well the author gets stupid about it and takes it the wrong way. True not all criticism you get is constructive but you gotta learn how to ignore destructive critics. (shakes head) Anyways I like your PWP and thank god it wasn't a rape or pedo one. Your a good writer and I hope you write another. This is my favorite couple too!