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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry about the formatting..I had been up for quite awhile and decided to just post the damn thing..and yes I intend to write more...I decided to end the chapter there as it was getting long.
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was pretty original, and very cute. Nice job. My only suggestion is to separate the paragraphs more. It would make it more easy to read. Other than that, great job.
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your formatting is all messed up. It looks like it is double-space or something but the sentences are cut in weird places. Good story but it's annoying to read it when the spacing is all funny.
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was good please write more I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute and funny. I can't wait for more