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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
funny and orgasmic
haha!
good combo
^_^
haha!
good combo
^_^
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute, sweet, and made me giggle ^_^ So keep up the writing!!!!
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet another great fiction! I'm so impressed. You ought to check out mine on my profile. Listen... I love your writing style. Do you post anything on fanfiction.net? If you do, shoot me an email or PM me on yahoo at bruce_waynes_sweetheart sometime! Great job!
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute cute cute! I loved it, please keep going.
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really, really good. I hope there is more...
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have met guys like Sukki... you describe how it makes you feel when people act like that very well. Thank God people like him aren't the norm. :-D
This is a good story. I really do enjoy it. I hope you mean to write more...it feels like you left us all hanging there a bit.
This is a good story. I really do enjoy it. I hope you mean to write more...it feels like you left us all hanging there a bit.
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, that was funny... hehe.. great fic!
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet really cool i liked it
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great first chapter. The sexual attraction between Inu and Kag during the camp scene was sizzling! Is it a one-shot or are you going to continue? I hope you do. My only criticism was that the formating made it harder to read. Try spacing things out and making more paragraphs. It just makes it easier for ppl to read.
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet plz add another chapter plz!!!!