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for What's Wrong Kagome?

by sailorgirl16

person devilgirl
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love the story.
person Paradiseboy
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good fic though it could have been better if you cut off the ending.
Who would say goodbye to their grandfather after spooning with someone?
Not bad though.
person Meena Vangel
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great... you are one truly good writer... when are you going to post the next chapter...?
Please inform me at my e-mail... address... :)
person inuyashafan
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
um lemon was good but dont u think its kina sick to mix her saying good bye to jichan and having her first expirince with inu i mean .........morbid sick mind u have
person pat
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow werid plotline but cool i think this is good enough to make more than a oneshot so if u can plz make another one following this one
person Robin loves Amon!
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow teehe when my grandpa passed on I just skiped school and ate raw cookie dough but hey whatever flows your boat teehe Well done
person Anon
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good lemon, but the ending was a bit weird. i thought that the reference back to her gpa was strange. but it was a good one shot! you should do more! ;)
person kegoma
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is so hot keep going i cant wayt to see what happinss next maybe they have sex this time so please up date sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!