rate_review Reviews

Hey....I was really looking forward to reading your story but had to stop as I found a couple of things confusing right off the bat. Nothing serious..just wanted to offer up some advice if I could. Take it or leave it its totally up to you. One of the things that borthered me was the use of the word stuipulated in the first sentence. Nit picky maybe, but stipulating is like clarifying...you can't do it without first saying something else. It makes it a difficult read because you enter the story feeling like you missed something. Another kinda *groan* issue I had was how the you emoted the phone as "ring ring" which is annoying at best, but then it goes on to insinuate that that "ring ring" is actually a song by beethoven. There were a few other things that we all suffer from, but these two things were what really turned me off of this story. Again...just thought I'd mention it...

Another great chapter! Poor souta, and the rest of kagome's family. Unlike Sesshoumaru, they have no idea what has really happened to Kagome. Congradulations on making Kagome one feisty little woman, she really is gonna make the story all the more intriging. Can't wait for your next update, til then!! take care
lith*

great chapter! i'm glad you brought sess and rin into this!

ah!! another great chapter. I'm glad u gave the story some insight as to how the family members of the 'sweet' couple are dealing with this tragic incident. man, inuyasha really is an egotistical bastard, and kagome a shrude bitch, .. it's just wat makes this story that more enjoyable! ^_^ Til ur next update, take care. cheers!
lith*

another beautiful chapter. man, kagome is a real bitch in this story, but it's what makes the plot soo much better!! ^_^ anyway, i'm glad that you backtracked to kagome's family and how they found about the crash, it gave the story more insight. well so far so good!! i'm really eager to see what happens when the storms reaches it's destination... *evil smile* ... haha, kk well til ur next chapter, take care!!
lith*

Another good chapter. Keep up the good work.

UUHHH!!! I love this story!!!! Oh please, please, PLEASE!!!! Update as soon as you can. I'm really looking forward in reading more chapters of this great story.

another great chapter!!! i'm glad you updated so soon. Like i said before, this is the first time i've seen this plot written out before and i really like it!!! it's unique and witty, great job so far!!!! i wish u luck completely the story! until ur next update, take care ^_^
lith*

Awesome story. Can't wait for the next update.

A great 2 chapters!!! i found your story today and thought i would take a look at it, but instead i ended up reading both chapters! it's quite a storyline you have here! i've never read a plot like this one and i'm very eager to see where you're going with this! til your next update, take care!! ^_^
lith*