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AH!!!! YES!!! YOU HAVE FINALLY LISTENED TO MOI!!! YESS!! You would not believe how happy I am now...!! *laughing manacially while bouncing up and down in glee happiness* BUT NARAKU isn't DEAD?! OH NO!!!! *cries* You were supposed to kill him - so that they could live together happiliy ever after! Fluffy has to find them and then they need to get showered and dressed, which would lead to another lemon... then finally one day they get married, have steamy marriage sex and then lead to a baby... yadadadaaa... ok. I'll shut up now... but like as usual, UPDATE!

This is by far one of the best Inuyasha/Kagome fanfics I've read. Please keep up the good work on writing this. I really look forward to reading more on this!

They escaped. Now, there real hell going to begin when Naraku finds them and try
to ruin their lives. Great chapter. Update soon.

Nice! You got some grammar problems but it's totally ok. I really, really, really, rEEEEAaalllyyy want a lemon! Soon pretty please? *bashes eyes*

So...

(GIVE ME A GODAMN LEMON ALREADY OR I'LL BASH YOUR HEAD OFF!! LEMON! LEMON!)

What? Don't give me that look I didn't say anything! *chuckles nervously*

Wow! Hello again, well i've managed to catch up on the last chappy. I really liked it! I'm actually left speechless! O_O Great work, as usual! I hope to read more of your story very soon! till your next update, take care!!
lith*

really good i was a bit dissapointed when it stopped i wanted to no the rest, so when is the next chapter cant waite. YAY ^_^

Great story. I hope that you can update this story soon.

Hey this ones it's very interesting and original... Kagome's character is so anoying and at the same time funny... and inuyasha the mediator one (well sometimes i fell him like it) it's just great... oooh but the greatest was naraku the latin drug deeler jajaja i just love it....

But there's something i just need to express... when naraku says bonito... he is refering to kagome right... welll bonito (with O) is used for boys and bonita (with A) for girls... so when he calls kagome you must write it like bonita... (not a flame... just a cultural note)

Well i really enjoyed what i read, so keep updating you are in the best part of the story right now...
And yes, i'm latin, that's why i know abaout bonito and bonita... and that's posibbly why i write this review with a lot of mistakes jeje...

What!? No you didn't ruin the freaking story. The person who wrote that review was just mad that that what they wanted didn't occur. I think you should just leave it the way it was. I'm sure you were going somewhere. This is your story and your here because you have a good imagination and you wish to share. Don't let a simple reviewer tell you how to write YOUR story! You're the author not him. If he didn't like it, oh well! Guess he'll have to stop reading. Please continue on and don't let him tell you how to write your story. By the way, LOVED the chapter! Your brilliant! Please update soon.

I'm really enjoying your story so far :) I just wanted to let you know, however, that "bonito" referenced to Kagome is incorrect - it should be "bonita," the feminine form of the word for beauty. It's a little quirk of the Spanish language, or just the Romance languages in general :D. Masculine forms usually end in "o," while the feminine case ends in "a" (or sometimes "dad," as in "ciudad," the word for city). If Naraku is a native speaker, he would never use the masculine form in reference to Kagome, especially if she turned him on ;). Keep up the great work!