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Don't u dare kill them off and don't u dare stop now. i need a good finito finale so plezzz update.

Peace & Love BastardOmega

I love it so far! it's very interesting. Please write more! 1000000000000000000000000/10

-Amanda-

very good story, keep it up.

I really do like the premise of this fiction and believe that it would make a nice fic. However, I was not able to read beyond the first couple of paragraphs in chapter three. You seriously need a beta and I do hope that you get one because I really would like to be able to read it. Too many words are used incorrectly. For instance, you used the word 'divergence' for the way that Inuyasha considered Kagome. I have no idea what you intended there because a divergence is a point where two or more things meet. I could list a whole page of these type of errors. Also, you have many sentences that do not make sense because they are run on sentences or have some other type of problem making me have to read it over in order to understand it. It makes the story not only very difficult to read, but exasperating. I wouldn't even be saying this if I truly didn't want to read this fic because I really would like to. But you need to get a beta. If I had the time, I would do it for you. Please get a beta so that I can read this very interesting and intriguing story.

Snowfall

I just love this fic!
Great chapter! Maybe they'll run into the old lady again someday...
Please continue to update!
-Jenna-

Hey girly!!! Oh wow this is a quiite interesting story. I read the first chapter and couldn't stop reading it!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

WOW!!! this stoy was sooooo, ''FUCKING SWEET'' I really luv!!! it and I hope there will be more to come!!

I'm still loving it and feel likean A** for not leaving more reviews. A very good chapter and I look forward to your next update.

yay for updates!!! great two chapters and VERY well done lemons. very well done indeed!! the plot thickens with that asshat will being alive, you might want to elaborate onto just how he regrouped...err...himself...that fast, but then again, it IS naraku. a couple spelling errors, only problem i've seen thus far. love it! keep it up!!!

That was a really good story. I think the plot was very well thought and written