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This is one of my favorite fics at the moment. I love it. You're a gifted writer and i thank you for writing this. It makes me happy. Oh so happy. I less than 3 this story!!!!

i think the paring should be yusuke/kagome/yomi just because its never been done before

Oh my freakin' crap, I love this fic. I think I begin every review like that now, don't I? How boring am I?? Just goes to show you why I take the time to read stories by people who really can write!! Oh man, this chapter had me so on edge I fell on my computer chair three times. Now I have a bruise on my bum to match the one on Kagome's eye. Good sweet Lord, can there *be* any more tension circling around these people?!?! I loved how you offset the anxiety with Yomi's tenderness towards Kagome. A random note, I had a feeling you were going to have her be pregnant with a girl, just because that family, as it is, is currently lacking some serious estrogen. I bet that little girl is going to be quite the cantankerous fighter, considering who she has as parents. Still, I'm anxious to see how the rest of the tournament pans out, how Yusuke is going to relate to Lydon, if they even get the chance, and who's going to come out on top. Oh, and if Kurama is given the valium he needs. Granted, he has a right to be miffed, but jeez, man, you need a 'zen' moment or something! Peace...tranquility...and more chapters! Great, fabulous, enthralling stuff, as usual. Please keep it up!

can't wait dor more

I love this! What an unexpected twist, Mouyoumaru (did I spell that right?) *shrugs* Ah the conflict! I wonder, does Kagome fight at all? Will she help Hiei if he loses and is absorbed or close to being absorbed, or will Hiei step out willingly...Update soon!

ARGHHHH!!! Not my Hiei!! *Runs and drags him out of the fight* MINE! Alrighty then! Down to business. Kurama is lucky that is was Kagome that hit him and not Shura or Lydon. Lydon would have likely just melted him and Shura would have more than likely pummeled him to an inch of his life. At least now they know that she had nothing to do with believing her dead. That'll teach Kurama to call her a bitch. I like the set up that you have going here, still hoping for a triangle. I think you could pull it off with a few plot twists :) Nice introduction to the bad guy, Kagome's going to need to be careful. The stress of knowing he is alive might be the final touches on throwing her into premature labor. Very true about the author's note. If Yomi is considered old then Kurama has to be considered ancient. It doesn't matter if this body of his isn't that old. Good chapter, I look forward to the next one. Update soon please.

*snicker* Have to agree with Ryukotsusei. Please just don´t kill Hiei, not by Moryomaru (he has the ugliest lips I´ve ever seen). Even if you have already decided the pairing I vote for Yomi/Kagome/Yusuke, it would make sense and Yomi is hot, nearly as hot as Hiei. This fic is definitely your best beside Two swords one heart. Congratulations!

I love this! Lydon is strong isn't he! Did I get his name right? Ugh. So early in the morning...Anyway, keep up the good work! I think a Yomi/Kagome/Yusuke would be great, still. I absolutely adore Yomi's character.

i say have it end in kag and yuske and yomi

Yay! A Yomi/Kagome lemon! This made my day. =)

It was a good chapter, including the convincing lie Yomi told Kurama. Though, why didn't Kurama say "Why didn't you tell us she was dead?" Instead of what he actually said? Something to do with the plot right? ... And if she was dead, wouldn't her soul go back to Kikyou or would it just go on to the Reikai? So confused...

ANYWAY, please keep up the wonderful, wonderful work (especially with any future Yomi/Kagome scenes ^.~) and update soon please!