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for Finding Completion

by kimisan

person anne
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was AWESOME really really AWESOME...Can't wait to see what will happen next...THANKS:D
person Ryukotsusei
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL It sounds like Lydon is a bit of a handful. Glad that he gets along with Yusuke though. Also glad that Hiei did not get devoured. I would miss him terribly *Huggles Hiei ignoring his protests* Good chapter, update soon please
person kuramasgirl
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. I can't wait to see what Yomi soes to Kagome as punishment. He can do the same to me. * laughs* I like where this story is going. Please continue to update. I can't wait to read more.
person Diane
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this & can hardly wait for the next chapter to get out, as usual. LOL Just as a FYI mam' (as you have it near the end of chapter 11) is spelled ma'am, it's a contraction of madam, sort of an old, possibly French, version of Mrs. Hope this helps.
person kougalover123
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter. family problems. well please update again soon.
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have got to find a way for Yomi, Kag, and Yusuke to all be together. I mean she cares for Yomi, but still feels stronger when Yusuke's around and Yusuke feels the same way. I also think that Kagome should be pissed when she finds out that Yomi told them she was dead. Yomi had no right to keep Yusuke's son from him. Even though the boy was told of his real father, Yomi had no right making Yusuke think his son was dead. But now that Kag is prego with Yomi's kid, what's she going to do now. She can't leave Yomi, but she should be with Yusuke. Damn it you've made my crazy with this fic, lol. I'm not even making any sense anymore. I'm lost and I want Yusuke in my bed. ^_^ That I'm not confused about, lol. I just hope no one walks away hurt. What a mess Kag's involved in. How about Yomi and Yusuke both take Kag as their mate. You know, Keiko is going to grow old fast, so maybe after Keiko realizes that she's like 60 years old holding hands with a guy who still looks like he's in his teens, may help her decide to move on. Or Keiko could get into an accident and die, nooooo that's mean. I'm not mean like that. Oh you'll figure it out. I'm rambling again. Fuck I love your fics.
person azurephoenix
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was great...I wonder what Kagome's reaction will be when she is told that everyone thougth she was dead. Will she stay with Yomi?? Can't wait for your next update and thanks for updating so soon.
person lilly
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Threesome please please I want another threesome. Yusuke, Kagome and Yomi. OH please pretty please. I love the chapter and I can not wait to read more. Update soon ASAP
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was AWESOME GREAT chapter...can't wiat to see how everyone is going to react when they find out that that was Kagome...