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by kimisan

person Ryukotsusei
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mukuro can have hope all she wants for finding love, so long as she isn't setting her sights on my fire apparition *glares at her* LOL I think Hiei is right though, it might come to blows soon with the way they both want her. I wonder how Kagome is going to handle all the attention and where does that leave our favorite kitsune? Good chapter my queen, update soon please
person lilly
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bad vivian, Bad, Bad, Vivian!!!!!!!! You spoil your peeps with a chapter a day for 11 days? and then nothing for 3 days? That is just wrong girl. You could at least drop a little message if you are having trouble with the next chapter. Sorry about whining I am just spoiled rotten with your quickness of updating. ^-^ I love your story so please continue it and update soon. I can not wait to read the next chapter and I really mean it!!!! (WHaaaaaaaa) I wanna the next chapter. (Whaaaaaaaaa)
person please update!!!
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update!!!
person Vanessa
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz update i want to see whats going to happen now that Naraku's offspring is running around.
person boo
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE THE BEST WRITER IN AFF!!! please continue writing...i live on your stories. update very soon please!!!


woooo!!!
person kitykat
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update!!! your creation is amazing
person Toral
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'd rather see the relationship stay focused with Yomi/Kagome. It feels more tangible between them than it does with the other characters.
person tangy kiss
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE****!!!!!*****
person Doodler5000
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm with Kogas Hentai Luver on this one. You're driving me crazy too. I can't even guess which way you're going to take this. I'm glad you made Lydon and Yusuke get along since they've already missed so much time together. Yomi did the right thing there. You have got to find a way to get rid of Keiko though. I can't see her accepting Lydon at all. Great story.
person reader00
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! and it comes with an added bonus! you update frequently!!!! here is my proposition, the more you update, the more i review. got it? deal? GOOD. well till the next update!