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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh evil Evil EVIL cliffy! Damn, I gotta know what is going to happen. Is Kikyo somehow going to erect a barrier around them or will Kagome come running out and be able to stop it somehow?? Somehow i think that captain's ass is toast once Kikyo turns her power loose on him for what he has done. Awesome chapter, I can't wait to see how Yusuke and Kagome react to each other once they see each other again. Update soon please!
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so awesome. That would be a great story. I think Keiko totally deserves what will happen. What about Inuyasha? Will he understand or bitch about it? I wish I could have sex like that.*starts to cry* Well keep up the good work.
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While I loved this story as a one-shot, I am beyond impressed and enamoured with the angle you've taken on the continuation. This second chapter is thrilling! There is so much DRAMA!!! Besides the obvious Reikai intervention, you have Kagome pregnant, Yusuke married, and Inuyasha, Shippo AND Kikyo living in the modern era!!!! Ho-ly CRAP!!! That's excitement for ya! And I must say, I'm very much enjoying your handling of Kikyo's character. Your description concerning her acceptance and the slow melting of her cold heart were dead on (no pun intended). I'm actually very eager to see her and Kagome become friends, but I'm even more excited to see how Yusuke and Inuyasha interact. Now, I could just be letting my imagination run away with me, but Yusuke always did remind me a little too much of Inuyasha...and since Inuyasha and Kikyo are together...and Kagome is Kikyo's reincarnation...does that hint at anything between Inu and Yusuke? Even if you think I'm from Mars and that assumption is just a big, fat 'no', I still think they'd make a formidable team. In a way they're both hanyou, right? Anyhoo, I ramble. Take it as a compliment, because if I'm rambling it means I'm thinking, and if I'm thinking that much about your fic then that just goes to show you how gripping your writing truly is. Great stuff!
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLease....please....please.......
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please please continue. This must be continued. I am begging vivian, I really am. This story was hot sexy and sweet. PLEASE continue I would love to read more.
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
do another chapter this could be a good story
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! I was hoping you would do this!!! I can't find a good Yus/Kag anywhere, please let this be long. It was such a well written one-shot I knew you could do it!!
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
intersing story, i hope u update soon. i love it very much
i really hope u do update. i'm sorry if my review seem so
little but don't be discourage. i like ur drammer also, A.
i really hope u do update. i'm sorry if my review seem so
little but don't be discourage. i like ur drammer also, A.
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was such a sweet fic! You kick Ass! Thank you for putting your wonderful fics on this site for our enjoyment!
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome! I love you! As soon as i am finished typing this, I am buliding a vivian shrine out of cheese puffs so i can worship! Huzzah for chapter 2!