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for Finding Completion

by kimisan

person Ryukotsusei
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh things are about to get interesting. Kurama's already expressing interest in her, as is Yusuke. But somehow I don't see him up and leaving Keiko willingly at this point, no matter how much of a connection they have. Then they have that jealousy issue going on, if he's not going to let Keiko go to be with Kagome would he stand by and watch someone else date her? Based on his reaction to Kurama merely touching her I think he'd have a very hard time. I see some serious angst coming up here, I love it! Wonderful job my Queen! *Hands you Hiei cookies* Can't wait until the next chapter. Update soon please.
person lilly
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!! Splat! Cliff hanger why did it have to be a cliff hanger? I loved the chapter Please continue and update soon. I can not wait to read more.
person Ryukotsusei
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh interesting, very interesting. Both Yusuke and Kurama are going to be absolutely pissed when they find out that she lied to them, of that I have no doubts. I'm surprised that Kurama didn't question her further but then perhaps he was all too willing to believe her lie, hoping that it would be the truth. It wouldn't surprise me in the least if that were the case. If so he's going to be kicking his own ass later. Glad that she found someone to annoy in some particular way, even if it is Yomi. I can only imagine how those two are going to get along lol At least she managed to talk some sense into Shura. Now if only Shippo would calm down some, I think if Yomi were going to attack he would have done so by now. Awesome chapter, many many cookies for you. Update soon please.
person kougalover123
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow..now kagome is making friends with yomi that is interesting i wonder how everyone will take to being lied to about her whereabouts. please update again soon.
person Magdalen Millicent
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please!!!!! ^^
person lilly
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you Vivian, Would it sound silly if I said I love you. Not like a Love as in relationship but love as in I am definitely a vivian peep. Ha Ha you got peeps!!! I love the new chapters! You Rock, Outloud!! Please continue and update soon. But I tell you I was really hoping you would make this longer and I am soooo happy you did.
person Magdalen Millicent
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!!! ^^
person Magdalen Millicent
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Please contine!!!! I love it!
person Luvspanky
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Its hard finding good Kag/Yus fanfiction. Please update soon!
person vashta
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so Yusuke is jealous, what is he going to do? Please, he should have kicked Keiko to the curb and kept Kagome to begin with. You are doing great, you have a very good grasp of grammar and a good plot going, I am waiting for the talk.