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for Finding Completion

by kimisan

person Kage
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is something I can see her doing, lying to protect them, to save them the pain. Keep up the good work!
person cat
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi I read Finding Completion and thought that it was great. I feel so bad for Kagome that Kurama and Yusuke this that she's a liar now. Are there going to be more chapters to the story. I would love to read more. Great Job.
person Shadowed
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm. Another plot twist. Very interesting. You are doing very well, please continue. And have a happy halloween. If you don't celebrate that then have a happy All Hallow's Eve.
person Kage
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh...Do I sense a bit of Yomi/Kagome coming on, hope to see more soon!
person Ryukotsusei
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good. Yomi now has his sight back which I am sure will come as a surpise to everyone when he chooses to reveal that little bit of information. I wonder if Yomi is going to confront her on why she lied to Yusuke and Kurama about her childs parentage. I'm sure the curiousity has to be eating him up right about now. It seems as if it won't make any difference to him however if he still intends to pursue her. I'm not surprised that Yusuke is having marital problems, I can only imagine how much worse they are going to become once Yusuke finds out he is indeed a father. And what will Kurama's feelings on the entire matter be once he realizes what happened. It's obvious that he still desires her as well. Can't wait to see what happens next, update soon please.
person Vanessa
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey love the new story, Its great can't wait for the update. Are Kagome and Yomi going to get together for a while will Something happen to let Reanki know where she is and send them after her again. will ppl come after her if they sense her son's energy. ??????????????
person redtatsu
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bad vivian! Bad, Bad, Bad vivian! Leave off just as it getting good. For the sake of my sanity, please tell me that you have the next chapter ready for tomarrow. Anyway, the story is great and I bow to your storytelling abilities.
person spacetyrant
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You do realize that cliffhangers are only bad when the story is entertaining and you need to know what happens next, right. And I would like to say that this is a very evil cliffhanger. So far I love the story and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
person Luvspanky
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story keeps getting better and better everytime I read it! Please update soon!
person unknownlady
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying your story and look forward to your next update.