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This was another lovely chapter, the amount of anguish you are bringing out thrills me. I cannot wait to see Yusuke's reaction hearing that not only was she really carrying his son but the both of them are dead. I'm sure that hearing that will crush him, knowing that they could have stopped it from happening. I'm sure Kurama is feeling guilty as well, having not seen through her lies.

Yomi was just how I pictured he would be in bed. Assertive and in control, manipulating every move that the two of them made. Highly erotic seeing Kagome take a submissive role to him. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon please

oh man, they were CAUGHT...but at least it was Kurama and not Keiko...this is gonna be all sorts of interesting...THANKS:D GREAT chapter:D

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One question: Do they make 'Talk-Dirty-Me' Yomi Dolls (Special Edition!) and where in God's NAME can I buy one? That had to be the hoTTest (do you read that? Those are two, count 'em, two, capi-T-al T's) dirty talk session I. Have. EVER. Read. And. I MEAN. IT.

Ho-ly Crap-sticks.

Every chapter of this story is great. The adventure is thrilling, the lies just get deeper and deeper (or is that Yomi? My bad! ^^) and the DRAMA. OH, the drama. That would be D-rama with another wonderful capital letter. There's a lot to emphasize with these last few chapters, isn't there?! Good lord, woman, just let Kagome go hog wild with the hotty hot men! Okay, I really don't mean that (I luvs Yus/Kag!) but DAMN, I mean hott damn, that Yomi scene has got to be one of the best lemons I've read in a good looooooooong while. I really, really, *reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally* loved his dirty talk. Does he have a hot-line? 1-900-HOT-YOMI. $.95 per call. I don't know, what do they charge in Makai? Anyhoo, I ramble. To finally shut up and put it simply, I utterly adore this fic.

And Yomi's dirty mouth ain't so darn bad, either.

This is getting interesting. I really would like to see the Yomi/Kags pairing over Y/K. That is if you are taking votes.

I was hoping for a Yusuke/Kagome story but after all this time Kagome and Yomi have set up a family unit that will be hard to break up. A threesome would be hard to pull off since Yusuke and Yomi are supposed to be enemies and rivals so I can't see them sharing a woman. There's a lot of testosterone between those two. Although, there's no reason Yusuke couldn't move to the Makai now and Kagome could spend time with each. Oh well, it's your story and I'll be reading to see how you solve this. Please update soon.

Very nice lemon with Yomi quite hot. Boy you are all about the angsting this is so set up for some major fireworks I love it. Thank you so much for the quick updates they just sweep me along.

So far this has been a compelling story. I can't wait to see what is next.

another great chapter. please update again soon.

Terrific. I can't wait for the shit to hit the fan. I hope Yomi doesn't get hurt in the process, or is the not a Yusuke/Kag pairing anymore. See what a good writer you are. You've got my totally stumped and wondering how all of this is going to play out. Yay you!!!!!!!!!

This is a great story. the characters are very in character (except when Kurama can't tell that Kagome lied...or when Kagome actually lied --but overall very in character). I really like the Yusuke and Kagome pairing and you have done a good job in making it believable.

thanks for sharing this story! and thanks for the rapid updates!