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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is me again. i just want to review before i forget or too
lazy. i haven't read chapter & yet but i plan to after i finish something.
I love your story so far and i love how u update it so soon, i just love people
like that. i don't have to wait and wonder if they (and u) are going to quit/hold on/
do it just to toruter us or somthing. i do hope u keep up and i promise to review more
when i have the time.
AGAIN i Love your story, Keep it up. i want something i lke after a day of hard work.
lazy. i haven't read chapter & yet but i plan to after i finish something.
I love your story so far and i love how u update it so soon, i just love people
like that. i don't have to wait and wonder if they (and u) are going to quit/hold on/
do it just to toruter us or somthing. i do hope u keep up and i promise to review more
when i have the time.
AGAIN i Love your story, Keep it up. i want something i lke after a day of hard work.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far...I cant wait to see the update, perhaps today???? PLEASE...oh well i guess ill review again when the update gets here...Later
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I only have one word to say about this story. DDDDAAAAAMMMMNNN. The was totally incredible. I love this story. I can't wait for you to add another chapter. Kudos to ya girl.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now it has to stay a Yomi/Kag. They've got a family thing here. Besides Yusuke had his chance and Kagome moved on. Maybe their might be some lingering feelings for Yusuke after all he was her first just like Inuyasha was her first love, but she's been with Yomi over 4 years. Yomi's freakin happy damnit!
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yusuke/Kag doesn't quite work anymore. I mean you still could, but I think with the way its heading that Yomi/Kagome would work better. And Chapter one doesn't lose any of its punch because it was a possibility a road that could have been taken but Yusuke decided not to take it. It would make Yusuke and Kagome close even if it's not on a romantic level like she's close with Inuyasha though she doesn't love him anymore. Speaking of are those two going to be coming back anytime soon?
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you should make it sound like a Kagome/Yusuke, but make it a Kagome/Yomi. But that's just me. But keep the updates comming.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was AWESOME...but Kurama is not going to be interested in her is he??? that was GREAT!!! THANKS:D
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that was one hell of a lemon...thinking I need a smoke after that. I love all the lies and deceit in this...twists everything to impossible angles which makes it harder to figure out. I am really happy this didn't stay a one-shot. Seems you have the same aversion to those as Mysty and I do.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your imagination and creativity continue to astound me. That you could so quickly take what I consider one of the best one shots I've ever read and turn it into an ongoing, complex and interesting story shows that you really have what it takes to be an author. I'm glad you plan on making this a Yusuke/Kagome fic, otherwise chapter one would lose it's punch. I do enjoy your fics. Keep up the good work and I'll look for your updates.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was AWESOME...Oh man, I really like that PaIrInG!!! THANKs:D