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I've made a few grammatical and spelling mistakes myself. But I normally find them and go back and fix them...eventually. I really enjoy this story, and I loved how you ended the chapter, it was quite amusing.

I agree with you whole heartedly. There is no reason why an American born person should not know how to use english properly. Also, you being from Japan is no big deal. I would like to go there one day, although I wish I could go now. Anyway, I really like your story and I hope you update soon!

I just started reading this story and I enjoy it very much. I have watched the movie The Labyrinth before and I'm a big fan of it. I was planning on writing a crossover with it but I see you beat me to the punch. I really like how you have made changes to they way the movie went and how time is a factor that you put into the story. Like the catilpillar (Sorry for the missed spelled words or run ons I'm writing this in a hurry.) is now a butterfly. Also you don't have the same chacters but still mention the old ones.
I've read all your ending notes and I hope you don't stop writing this story. I know from experince not all people are kind enough to take a few minutes of their time and review someones work, but that is just people for you. I'm also very impressed that English is your third language. I'm trying now to learn Spanish, English is my first language; I am American born. I know its very annoying when people don't take pride enough in their work and have many spelling errors and grammar mistakes. I'm not going to defend them, but I myself have a disorder that makes my eyes show my brain some words backwards or mixed up. It took me several years to mix my disablity which still effects me now, but I'm in advanced english now. Though I still have problems with a few things. I'm sorry that I rambled on like that, I'm just saying yes they should put more time in their work. But just remember some might have problems with it, but then again some are just lazy. But in either case I totally agree they should work harder on their stories like you do.
But any case I do love this story and I'm impressed with you as a writer. I hope to see new chapters soon and even more works from you. Everytime you post a new chapter I'll be sure to review, even if its just to say how much I love the chapter.
Kai Mastermind

I am very interested to see how you will manage to tell the story while Kagome is in the Labyrinth. Will it be similar to Sara's experience? Or will it be completely different? And furthermore, will Kagome leave Jareth like Sara did or will she stay? And what will happen to Souta? These are all questions I am interested in finding the answers too...please continue your story.

You should go against the movie. The labyrinth is fairly large, after all. What are the coincidenses that two people would take the exact same route?

And good fic, by the by. I think Bitch of the Highway Thieves (or J Glessner, as she's known now) was the first to write this crossover, but I like that she's (i think it's a girl) not the only one capable of this type of x-over.

Hope you get your internet back up soon. Until then, I'll be waiting paitently. <(^v^)>

Oh, and personally, I think your fic is much better than her's!

YES! Thank you soooooo much for updating! ^____________________^

You are one of the bigest review whores i have ever come across....
... right under myself.

Brilliant story. I less than 3 Bowie!

Please do continue. Can't wait for the next installment!

I love it. David Bowie is so hot!

Please continue soon and i hope that your internet problems work out soon!

Good job fixing it!...now I can really read it!.

Great story start! Labryinth is one of my favorite movies so of course I love this crossover idea! :)