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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello...please update soon this storyis really good....i wonder is sota going to tell jareth her story....or not...
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your secret is safe with me. ^.~
Another wonderful update... I want that Library; it would make my day much easier. All books ever written? I'll bet all the ancient documents are there. No more reason to get annoyed when the manuscript you want was destroyed centuries ago... *sigh*
Anywhen, back on topic. I'd never thought of Ludo as a 'giant orange teddy bear' before, but that's a very accurate description. And Hiroyuki is probably the best gargoyle of them all, as most of his kind belongs to the Unseelie court.
…Is the name ‘Hiroyuki’ used in Inuyasha? I’ve heard this name before somewhere, I think. Or maybe it was a similar name? I don’t know. I do know that what I’m thinking of has something to do with the Halberd of Heaven and Hell (or however that was translated).
Anyway, update when time allows.
Another wonderful update... I want that Library; it would make my day much easier. All books ever written? I'll bet all the ancient documents are there. No more reason to get annoyed when the manuscript you want was destroyed centuries ago... *sigh*
Anywhen, back on topic. I'd never thought of Ludo as a 'giant orange teddy bear' before, but that's a very accurate description. And Hiroyuki is probably the best gargoyle of them all, as most of his kind belongs to the Unseelie court.
…Is the name ‘Hiroyuki’ used in Inuyasha? I’ve heard this name before somewhere, I think. Or maybe it was a similar name? I don’t know. I do know that what I’m thinking of has something to do with the Halberd of Heaven and Hell (or however that was translated).
Anyway, update when time allows.
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your right, repeats are bad!
J. Glessner yelled at me, cuz I pretended I didn't know her, and she read your reviews (she has a tendancy to do that when she's not sure how good the fic will be, because, apparently, my judgement is normally bad))... Heh heh heh. Actually, I was just bragging, cuz she's my older sister. Yeah, yeah I know. And jynkers is actually her cat's name, I just stole it XP
Anyway, brilliant update, as always. Ludo isn't going to be a main character, is he? I mean, he's cool and all, but- *shakes head* Nevermind! At least she's avoiding the bog and knows to avoid the bird man. Please update soon. Or whenever times allows. Ah hell, school takes so much time out of our lives!
J. Glessner yelled at me, cuz I pretended I didn't know her, and she read your reviews (she has a tendancy to do that when she's not sure how good the fic will be, because, apparently, my judgement is normally bad))... Heh heh heh. Actually, I was just bragging, cuz she's my older sister. Yeah, yeah I know. And jynkers is actually her cat's name, I just stole it XP
Anyway, brilliant update, as always. Ludo isn't going to be a main character, is he? I mean, he's cool and all, but- *shakes head* Nevermind! At least she's avoiding the bog and knows to avoid the bird man. Please update soon. Or whenever times allows. Ah hell, school takes so much time out of our lives!
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeek! An update! Oh, I'm so happy. Okay, that way over exaggerating. But I loved it, anyway. Lunar mushrooms, hmm? Sounds sorta like a lunar flower. Just a bit. Hiroyuki is so very neat character. Will he make another appearance?
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would love to make this another long review like last time, but I took a slight detour from my homework and need to get back, shortly. I really liked this chapter. I wasn't expecting this and I'm thrilled that unlike most crossovers with books or movies your making new events, not just the same ones in the book or movie. I also still love your references to old characters, Ludo was always a favorite character of mine. How can you not love him? Also does the word Fae mean anything or is it just a named you picked?
I also like that fact that your not just basing it totally on Jarith and Kagome. All stories need more than that, yes that is the mean theme but their is so much more that can be said. I wish that other authors would take a note from you and realize that. Also that prayer placed in the story was very interesting. Also your English is outstanding don't put yourself down, I wish I had your talent for languages. Anyway, I must be going, homework calls. I can't wait for your next chapter and I'll be ready to review agian once it comes out.
Kai Mastermind
I also like that fact that your not just basing it totally on Jarith and Kagome. All stories need more than that, yes that is the mean theme but their is so much more that can be said. I wish that other authors would take a note from you and realize that. Also that prayer placed in the story was very interesting. Also your English is outstanding don't put yourself down, I wish I had your talent for languages. Anyway, I must be going, homework calls. I can't wait for your next chapter and I'll be ready to review agian once it comes out.
Kai Mastermind
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Will Jareth allow Kagome to get that kind of help without punishment? He reduced time when Sara got help...will he do the same to Kagome? When Kagome was in the library and created a barrier, did Jareth see? I'm curious to see what the answers are.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your English is fine but if you don't update i will hunt you down (ok and now to the lighter and more happier end of this review) YOUR STORY FREAKIN ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update, I can't wait till the next chapter!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool story. The Labyrinth is one of my fave movies. Update soon!¡
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I actually read AN's, and I'd just like to say: Well Spoken. Most of the time, my grammar flies away only when I'm typing quickly... and sometimes I could use a dictionary. However, I do have beta readers so I have minimum mistakes. I'm almost obsessed with spelling and grammar.
Now, if only I could get myself to re-read what i write. That might help me out a little more... Ah, well. The day will eventually come. I can't be that bad, though. I got published! (Honestly, though, I haven't any clue why. I re-read what was published, and it was horrible in so many places. *sigh*)
Anyway, I still love this fic. And you're updating faster than I usually do. It's always a good thing to find a better author than yourself, gives you something to work for. ^.^
Now, if only I could get myself to re-read what i write. That might help me out a little more... Ah, well. The day will eventually come. I can't be that bad, though. I got published! (Honestly, though, I haven't any clue why. I re-read what was published, and it was horrible in so many places. *sigh*)
Anyway, I still love this fic. And you're updating faster than I usually do. It's always a good thing to find a better author than yourself, gives you something to work for. ^.^